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4/16/2021 c1 catspats31
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters."

Please merge all chapters that are full of non-story content with a chapter of your story that has story content.
9/4/2020 c7 3eriv del
Bulma's baby here is not bulla she was carring Vegeta's second son during the battle she was hit by a falling rock miscarring her child
8/25/2020 c4 2GamingE00
you should write this out i like the idea

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