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8/24 c1 52shari
You did such a good job of Andy’s inner dialogue. He wanted the privileges a man gets from hard work. But his immaturity or inability to comprehend that his actions can’t be justified. He thought his grandma would just forgive and if not he’d just be rid of her. He didn’t count on Kate strong sense of right and wrong no matter who you are
8/24 c1 57lostcowgirl
While I've commented in detail on the Board, I didn't mention one thing that makes this story special. You end your insights into Andy's clash of bodily maturity with emotional immaturity with him finally being forced to face the consequences of his actions. Alas, he realizes those consequences mean his death at the hands of his grandmother.

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