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10/9/2020 c1 39Riene
This is a great description of that scene, focusing on her thoughts, feelings, regrets, dreams, and desires. I really like how you delved into their thoughts here, the give and take of wanting contrasting with conquest and allure on his side, anger and determination on hers.
8/31/2020 c1 mystykldrack
Silly man, you'll have to live with that and it's your fault.

That was so good 3
8/29/2020 c1 2SpookyMormonHellDream
OUCH
8/29/2020 c1 10Phantom Rose 0617
Beautifully written! Well done! :)
8/29/2020 c1 27jennyfair
AAAAAH I love this so much! Beautifully written and the ending is a gut punch but perfect (you know how I love angst). SO GOOD.
8/28/2020 c1 8Qtkittee
Oh I loved this. Beautifully written!
8/28/2020 c1 21ThePhantom'sEnigma
OH MY - this takes you on one hell of a ride. This is so passionate and vivid it's actually made my temperature rise! owo wowie, this is actually so good it's addictive. MANNNNN this makes me want an Erik even more - that prompt is brilliantly put to use. The inner conflict makes the scene that more passionate when she is lost in Erik's passion-filling haze, there is nothing short of Erik being seductive as hell in this one and exactly embodies the song 'Beneath a Moonless Sky' probably even better than the song itself. It takes the meaning of the song and portays it with an intesntiy that is too strong to deny. In a way there is a sort of equilibrium between those two and this is when I can see Erik being as much as a drug to Christine as she is to him. And I say, the ending is heart-crushingly brilliant. Brava, Brava Bravisisma.
(sorry for my rambling, but I wanted to let you know what I thought hehe)!
Merci,
Enigma.
8/28/2020 c1 12ghostwritten2
Ooh, this is so well done. Really good.
8/27/2020 c1 27CharlieBoneFan
Nice job!
8/27/2020 c1 82Starwatcher2018
Nah! Nicely written, but Nah! :)
8/27/2020 c1 2EmeraldHeather
Ahhhhh sooooo good. I love the description of the kiss from Christine's perspective. So much repressed desire! I love it!

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