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4/15/2021 c2 Guest
Wtf. What kind of story is this? Makes no sense whatsoever. I recommend you to work on your writing skills as well as your story telling. Make a decent plot with structure.
I also, personally hate when authors write like
Naruto:
Hinata:

Like the story is some sort of play. It doesn’t look right and I can’t see what I’m reading in my head at all.

So I recommend you try a different approach. :/
4/10/2021 c2 Kiyomi
The story is good but for suggestion you need to improve your writing skill.
You can try to read other fanfics from other NaruHina author then you can understand how to make good fanfiction.
9/22/2020 c1 kunt-destroyer420
Trash.

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