for Selling Your Soul For Pleasure and Profit8/30/2020 c1 GetRektNuub
Guuru? Seriously dude? You could have just written Ghoul.
Anyway this was interesting. Let's see where it goes.
Guuru? Seriously dude? You could have just written Ghoul.
Anyway this was interesting. Let's see where it goes.
8/30/2020 c1 Gareth Doherty
Wonder if he'll ever "rank up" his race to the stronger one eyed hybrids like Eto seeing as it removes most of the disadvantages of being a Ghoul. I'm pretty sure Eto can even eat normally really good for blending in.
Wonder if he'll ever "rank up" his race to the stronger one eyed hybrids like Eto seeing as it removes most of the disadvantages of being a Ghoul. I'm pretty sure Eto can even eat normally really good for blending in.
8/30/2020 c1 Koncor the great
Interesting I'm looking forward to seeing were this leads I've played with the idea of a warlock before I just never had enough time to sink into a warlock build for a gamer story it's a good fit but a lot of work. And gamers are a lot of work on their own. Point is I can appreciate the amount of effort. Though if this were any nomalish world I would say ghoul and thief are the best possible build I mean wean you eat people you need to have a reliable source and leave no evidence but this is dxd no one will look twice at a bunch of random people disappearing. Though I get the feeling that a certain rook knows exactly what he is enhanced senses are a bitch and he was around corupses and blood not to mention a ghoul would have it's own unique scent and her instincts would immediately pick up on a apex predator. Fun thing about nature sometimes pray will offer its slf up to a predator sexually out of a instictual need to pass on it's Gentiles as she's part of a dying race this means she's likely to submit quite easily to him. Just food for thought on some fun angles to play with her and his natures.
Interesting I'm looking forward to seeing were this leads I've played with the idea of a warlock before I just never had enough time to sink into a warlock build for a gamer story it's a good fit but a lot of work. And gamers are a lot of work on their own. Point is I can appreciate the amount of effort. Though if this were any nomalish world I would say ghoul and thief are the best possible build I mean wean you eat people you need to have a reliable source and leave no evidence but this is dxd no one will look twice at a bunch of random people disappearing. Though I get the feeling that a certain rook knows exactly what he is enhanced senses are a bitch and he was around corupses and blood not to mention a ghoul would have it's own unique scent and her instincts would immediately pick up on a apex predator. Fun thing about nature sometimes pray will offer its slf up to a predator sexually out of a instictual need to pass on it's Gentiles as she's part of a dying race this means she's likely to submit quite easily to him. Just food for thought on some fun angles to play with her and his natures.
8/30/2020 c1 thiago.anime.neves
Interesting, a rather quickly development, but not a bad one, I would like to see more development in the MCs psychic and mannerisms of course
Interesting, a rather quickly development, but not a bad one, I would like to see more development in the MCs psychic and mannerisms of course
8/30/2020 c1 
1axis1247
Alright solid chapter one man there were a couple of spelling errors but nothing major. Grammar was good. I like the premise and story (warlock main forever).
1axis1247Alright solid chapter one man there were a couple of spelling errors but nothing major. Grammar was good. I like the premise and story (warlock main forever).
8/30/2020 c1 TKing1517
Bro just say "ghoul" lol...I was trying to find out what the feck a "guru" was for like 20 mins...
Admittedly its also kinda my fault for not reading literally for another 3 seconds..
Bro just say "ghoul" lol...I was trying to find out what the feck a "guru" was for like 20 mins...
Admittedly its also kinda my fault for not reading literally for another 3 seconds..
8/30/2020 c1 Munchnax
As the first person to review I feel special! Javent read it yet be here to suppourt. Good Job and Keep going!
As the first person to review I feel special! Javent read it yet be here to suppourt. Good Job and Keep going!