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8/30/2020 c1 GetRektNuub
Guuru? Seriously dude? You could have just written Ghoul.

Anyway this was interesting. Let's see where it goes.
8/30/2020 c1 UnknownUserNr47
Good chapter.
8/30/2020 c1 Gareth Doherty
Wonder if he'll ever "rank up" his race to the stronger one eyed hybrids like Eto seeing as it removes most of the disadvantages of being a Ghoul. I'm pretty sure Eto can even eat normally really good for blending in.
8/30/2020 c1 Kalstorm99
8/30/2020 c1 Koncor the great
Interesting I'm looking forward to seeing were this leads I've played with the idea of a warlock before I just never had enough time to sink into a warlock build for a gamer story it's a good fit but a lot of work. And gamers are a lot of work on their own. Point is I can appreciate the amount of effort. Though if this were any nomalish world I would say ghoul and thief are the best possible build I mean wean you eat people you need to have a reliable source and leave no evidence but this is dxd no one will look twice at a bunch of random people disappearing. Though I get the feeling that a certain rook knows exactly what he is enhanced senses are a bitch and he was around corupses and blood not to mention a ghoul would have it's own unique scent and her instincts would immediately pick up on a apex predator. Fun thing about nature sometimes pray will offer its slf up to a predator sexually out of a instictual need to pass on it's Gentiles as she's part of a dying race this means she's likely to submit quite easily to him. Just food for thought on some fun angles to play with her and his natures.
8/30/2020 c1 thiago.anime.neves
Interesting, a rather quickly development, but not a bad one, I would like to see more development in the MCs psychic and mannerisms of course
8/30/2020 c1 1Artekha
Thanks for the story Draven, I like the premise.
8/30/2020 c1 1axis1247
Alright solid chapter one man there were a couple of spelling errors but nothing major. Grammar was good. I like the premise and story (warlock main forever).
8/30/2020 c1 RotcehM
Good work brother
8/30/2020 c1 TKing1517
Bro just say "ghoul" lol...I was trying to find out what the feck a "guru" was for like 20 mins...

Admittedly its also kinda my fault for not reading literally for another 3 seconds..
8/30/2020 c1 1kyuubi7
First! Also a really good start man
8/30/2020 c1 Munchnax
As the first person to review I feel special! Javent read it yet be here to suppourt. Good Job and Keep going!
8/30/2020 c1 23jenes-db
I like it! New story hype!
8/30/2020 c1 2White birb
8/30/2020 c1 1axis1247
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