for White Roses Part 3: The Thirteenth Day9/24/2021 c6 Guest
I like reading your stories, I really do but it is quite a struggle.
You have way too many characters in your story and
Keeping track of everything and everyone is exhausting.
I would love to read a story from you with very minimal characters and a case that just relates to the boys. No Fenton, Sam or collig.
I like reading your stories, I really do but it is quite a struggle.
You have way too many characters in your story and
Keeping track of everything and everyone is exhausting.
I would love to read a story from you with very minimal characters and a case that just relates to the boys. No Fenton, Sam or collig.
6/14/2021 c24 Demigod2020PJFAN
I swear the only thing keeping joe alive ever is his super strong plot armour! Lol!
I swear the only thing keeping joe alive ever is his super strong plot armour! Lol!
5/4/2021 c1 Kaizer1008
For such a great story, a lot of audience must read your book. You can publish your work on NovelStar Mobile App.
For such a great story, a lot of audience must read your book. You can publish your work on NovelStar Mobile App.
12/19/2020 c25 Bkworm4life4
Finally caught up! Thoroughly enjoyed the story and can't wait to see what you gift us with next! Hope you had a good Thanksgiving and a wonderful Christmas (or whatever holiday you celebrate) and new year!
Finally caught up! Thoroughly enjoyed the story and can't wait to see what you gift us with next! Hope you had a good Thanksgiving and a wonderful Christmas (or whatever holiday you celebrate) and new year!
11/26/2020 c25 BMSH
Happy Thanksgiving. I am thankful for people like you who are willing to share their stories. Enjoy the holidays!
Happy Thanksgiving. I am thankful for people like you who are willing to share their stories. Enjoy the holidays!
11/25/2020 c25 
8ErinJordan
Awesome story can't wait to read what you have next. Happy Thanksgiving, God bless and be safe
8ErinJordanAwesome story can't wait to read what you have next. Happy Thanksgiving, God bless and be safe
11/25/2020 c25 20angelicalkiss
So glad to see that Joe is okay. A little worried there for a minute. It was a good ending to the story. And Joe graduated? Scary thought! Lol! Although I am really not a fan of Callie, Frank finally asking her out was sweet. And the brothers' talk...that was great! Looking forward to the next story whenever you decide to publish it. And I wouldn't mind checking out a new Nancy Drew series from you either. Have a great Thanksgiving and God bless!
20angelicalkissSo glad to see that Joe is okay. A little worried there for a minute. It was a good ending to the story. And Joe graduated? Scary thought! Lol! Although I am really not a fan of Callie, Frank finally asking her out was sweet. And the brothers' talk...that was great! Looking forward to the next story whenever you decide to publish it. And I wouldn't mind checking out a new Nancy Drew series from you either. Have a great Thanksgiving and God bless!
11/25/2020 c25 Candylou
So glad Joe is okay. Good Frank and Callie finally got together. they all will have a long road ahead with dealing with what they've seen and everything that happened, but I think they will be fine. so good reflections from all the characters including Fenton and Laura, and now the others will have to reflect with their lives. Fantastic story! Looking forward to what comes next
So glad Joe is okay. Good Frank and Callie finally got together. they all will have a long road ahead with dealing with what they've seen and everything that happened, but I think they will be fine. so good reflections from all the characters including Fenton and Laura, and now the others will have to reflect with their lives. Fantastic story! Looking forward to what comes next
11/25/2020 c25 max2013
Great ending, looking forward to the next in your series-Happy Thanksgiving and Merry Christmas!
Great ending, looking forward to the next in your series-Happy Thanksgiving and Merry Christmas!
11/23/2020 c24 angelicalkiss
wow. Pearson was one messed up lady. every person is a blessing no matter their flaws. you can try to take away imperfections but mental issues can never be taken away. depression, anxiety, those are normal mentalities that nearly every human goes through. at one point in my life I would have agreed to not bring a child into this world that had an imperfection but now would never think that. I may not have children who have disabilities but they're not perfect. nobody is. we just love them all the same no matter what. I do agree with another reader tho. Pearson got off easily. she took the easy way out obviously because she didn't want to be caught. sick woman. great chapter tho. let's get Joe some help!
wow. Pearson was one messed up lady. every person is a blessing no matter their flaws. you can try to take away imperfections but mental issues can never be taken away. depression, anxiety, those are normal mentalities that nearly every human goes through. at one point in my life I would have agreed to not bring a child into this world that had an imperfection but now would never think that. I may not have children who have disabilities but they're not perfect. nobody is. we just love them all the same no matter what. I do agree with another reader tho. Pearson got off easily. she took the easy way out obviously because she didn't want to be caught. sick woman. great chapter tho. let's get Joe some help!
11/22/2020 c24 BMSH
You let Pearson off too easy. She could have shot herself in the head and been irreversibly brain damaged left to be her own worst nightmare.
Looking forward to the Joe/Iola reunion!
You let Pearson off too easy. She could have shot herself in the head and been irreversibly brain damaged left to be her own worst nightmare.
Looking forward to the Joe/Iola reunion!
11/22/2020 c24 max2013
Pearson took the coward's way out-Looking forward to the wrap up and Joe's recovery-right?!
Pearson took the coward's way out-Looking forward to the wrap up and Joe's recovery-right?!
11/22/2020 c24 Guest
A sad end for Dr Pearson, but at least she won't be able to hurt anybody else again. At least Frank and the others are okay. That was a real emotional chapter for Fenton, it really showed his human side. Also, showed the support he had from Sam as well. Hopefully Joe will be okay. Update as soon as possible. Looking forward to see what happens next. Fantastic story!
A sad end for Dr Pearson, but at least she won't be able to hurt anybody else again. At least Frank and the others are okay. That was a real emotional chapter for Fenton, it really showed his human side. Also, showed the support he had from Sam as well. Hopefully Joe will be okay. Update as soon as possible. Looking forward to see what happens next. Fantastic story!