for Broken heroes8/1/2023 c1 SoulOfCinders
Greg you crazy SOB you just became one of the few people to have completed a story and made me read all the way through fully invested till the end with this wacky-ass but also serious story
Greg you crazy SOB you just became one of the few people to have completed a story and made me read all the way through fully invested till the end with this wacky-ass but also serious story
3/4/2023 c1 
42evolution-500
Not bad, but could use some work. There are some grammatical errors here and there.
42evolution-500Not bad, but could use some work. There are some grammatical errors here and there.
2/11/2022 c23 Logan
Why do I think VEGA is going to send a missile at every member of Seele and kill them, and if that is the case then why didn't VEGA do it sooner.
Why do I think VEGA is going to send a missile at every member of Seele and kill them, and if that is the case then why didn't VEGA do it sooner.
2/10/2022 c14 Logan
The line from the slayer of fighting his way through hell to find gendo's soul and toture it until the dark lord himself tells him to stop is a nice way of showing how it doesn't matter who someone is, if they piss off the doom slayer their fate is sealed.
The line from the slayer of fighting his way through hell to find gendo's soul and toture it until the dark lord himself tells him to stop is a nice way of showing how it doesn't matter who someone is, if they piss off the doom slayer their fate is sealed.
2/9/2022 c11 Logan
The doom cast are just comedy gold in this.
The doom cast are just comedy gold in this.
8/2/2021 c3 Guest
When asuka called shinji baka the first think that came to my mind was sussy baka and that made me laugh
When asuka called shinji baka the first think that came to my mind was sussy baka and that made me laugh
8/1/2021 c2 Guest
Technically if it weren't for the Slayer earth would be not existing because the icon of sin destroys reality just by existing
Technically if it weren't for the Slayer earth would be not existing because the icon of sin destroys reality just by existing
7/16/2021 c1 HeWhoShouldn'tBeNamed
Ok, so. I'm seeing some good ideas. Well written for the most part. Minor problem with run-on sentences. But otherwise I'm loving it.
Ok, so. I'm seeing some good ideas. Well written for the most part. Minor problem with run-on sentences. But otherwise I'm loving it.
6/20/2021 c32 11deathbringer374
I never really read crossovers.
This one caught my eye, however, and I have to say I've enjoyed the ride quite a lot, an intensely original and adventurous concept, performed quite well as the story develops. I sense a lot of yourself in the interactions and dialogues, and I applaud the boldness it takes to lay your own experiences, thoughts and emotions into your plot. Bravo.
The ending was excellent and quite pleasant to read. I laughed loud seeing my name! Rejoice providing yet another great story! Thank you for writing, and please write more! Much respect and a big hug, brother.
PEACE.
11deathbringer374I never really read crossovers.
This one caught my eye, however, and I have to say I've enjoyed the ride quite a lot, an intensely original and adventurous concept, performed quite well as the story develops. I sense a lot of yourself in the interactions and dialogues, and I applaud the boldness it takes to lay your own experiences, thoughts and emotions into your plot. Bravo.
The ending was excellent and quite pleasant to read. I laughed loud seeing my name! Rejoice providing yet another great story! Thank you for writing, and please write more! Much respect and a big hug, brother.
PEACE.
6/20/2021 c32 4SixSpartan
che dire un finale col botto (garzie del poccolo cameo ;) )
devo dire che il modo in cui hai fatto evolvere la storyline è stato quasi perfetto ed il finale mi ha un po' ricordato evangelion re take.
sarò felice di leggere qualsiasi altra cosa che pubblicherai.
ti ringrazio per questa storia stupenda che mi ha aiutato in un momento difficile e sono felice di poter dire che è una della fanfic migliori che ho letto di evangelion.
4SixSpartanche dire un finale col botto (garzie del poccolo cameo ;) )
devo dire che il modo in cui hai fatto evolvere la storyline è stato quasi perfetto ed il finale mi ha un po' ricordato evangelion re take.
sarò felice di leggere qualsiasi altra cosa che pubblicherai.
ti ringrazio per questa storia stupenda che mi ha aiutato in un momento difficile e sono felice di poter dire che è una della fanfic migliori che ho letto di evangelion.
5/27/2021 c31 SixSpartan
Che dire pelle d’oca per metà del capitolo e la citazione di Dante è stata perfetta sono molto curioso ed eccitato di vedere come andrà a finire e riguardo la storia... la narrazione mi piace un botto e il modo in cui hai sviluppato la trama mi piace molto.
Ottimo lavoro
Che dire pelle d’oca per metà del capitolo e la citazione di Dante è stata perfetta sono molto curioso ed eccitato di vedere come andrà a finire e riguardo la storia... la narrazione mi piace un botto e il modo in cui hai sviluppato la trama mi piace molto.
Ottimo lavoro