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10/23 c3 eastraven
You have such a beautiful and detailed way of writing. This chapter was written in such painstaking detail that I felt completely immersed within the environment. Like, my mind is completely blown away! And I don't know if I can articulate this properly, but there's a certain way that you tell your stories (maybe it's the pacing, diction and characterization?) that immediately catches and holds my attention. I just love that it's Cloud's POV, and there's something haunting about him. You just wanna know what's his story and what's in store for him.

The smut is tasteful! You say it's hard to write, but you made it so you conveyed the passion and love shared between Cloud and Tifa, but didn't turn it into some crazy porn-thing that becomes just TMI. The creaky bed and gripping the sheets thing gives us the idea that yeah, they're gettin it on reaaal good. But they give me the impression that they're somewhat newlyweds? I guess I have to keep reading to find out! But yeah, this chapter may have focused heavily on the scenery but it was written so well! I love your thoroughness and attention to detail. You're amazing.
5/3 c10 25BAM50
Vincent in a poncho better be in remake lol
4/14 c9 25BAM50
Oh no!
2/1 c7 25BAM50
Thank you for the update!
2/1 c7 20silver-doe287
I shall forever mourn the chocolate, what a sad waste lol. Cloud definitely need chocolate in his life, it really helps!

Great transition chapter! I love the Aerith and Tifa time in this one, because it's nice to have them lean on each other and bounce ideas off each other!

Finally, SILVER-HAIRED MAN IN THE BAR. I AM MIGHTY CONCERNED!

Thank you for the update! It was the highlight of my day. <3
1/10 c6 silver-doe287
First of all, AERITH IS AN ABSOLUTE BADASS! WHOOP! I'm so happy the Fairs and Strifes are neighbors. I'm highly concerned about their assumptions on the whole younged brother business, and I'm so excited to see where that goes next. Then we have poor Cloudthe guy needs a vacation, stat! I'm highly anticipating meeting the Mayor of Corelsoon! Finally, this is me expressing my awe at your descriptions. You write like an artist paints a landscapeI can see with every word a new brushstroke for the canvas of setting that you write. It's just such a beautiful thing and what better way to accentuate such descriptive writing than with impressive scenery? Just wanted to make sure my awestruck self recognizes your beautiful writing ability. Keep up the amazing work!
11/14/2020 c1 silver-doe287
WHAT A PRECARIOUS SITUATION! First Tifa, and now poor Cloud... What will he do? How will he get away fron Zack to fulfill S's wishes? And we're about to meet the best boy Barret himself! I particularly loved the parallels of both characters being put in similar situations this chapter, and the way you wrote Sephiroth is just CHILLING. Thanks for the update, I can't WAIT to read what happens next!
9/17/2020 c3 25BAM50
The ending oh boy
9/15/2020 c3 silver-doe287
The "oooooooooOoooooH" noise I made out loud when I got to the end part there was ridiculous, but oh man am I just LOVING this story! I wish I could see this tooI want to picture the boys in cowboy hats and attire! I may go to my sketchbook, but I am not a people sketcher... Thank you for this chapter!
9/8/2020 c2 25BAM50
Hot dam enjoy steaming chapter! Can't wait for more!
9/8/2020 c2 Guest
Aw man I started to hope Tifa will be there for the Corel action when Cloud asked lol. Anyway this is so much fun so far! Looking forward to updates :)
9/8/2020 c2 silver-doe287
There's something about a man dipping his cowboy hat and saying "ma'am" that just makes me swoon... Thanks for the delightful chapter! I'm ready to get to the bros on the road to fight some monsters!
9/2/2020 c1 25BAM50
I'm hook , enjoyed the new world that you are building
9/2/2020 c1 1TKB87
I’m not normally a fan of Western AU but I love the start of this. I also would have never guessed you don’t write M scenes it’s done tastefully but is still steamy can’t wait for more

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