
12/29/2020 c5
39jean d'arc
I'm happy Stannis took precautions for Shireen should anything happen to him ...
Thanks

I'm happy Stannis took precautions for Shireen should anything happen to him ...
Thanks
12/29/2020 c5
21Rolling Mist 13
Not sure if it would be Bronn to teach Joffrey, he is regarded as scum, a low born sellsword. You portrayed Joffrey in a more positive light which is different. I don't think Bronn would have been knocked out, he would be dead and likewise I am not sure Tyrion would have finished Stannis but rather have captured him and put him on trial but I am interested in what the Lannisters are going to do next.

Not sure if it would be Bronn to teach Joffrey, he is regarded as scum, a low born sellsword. You portrayed Joffrey in a more positive light which is different. I don't think Bronn would have been knocked out, he would be dead and likewise I am not sure Tyrion would have finished Stannis but rather have captured him and put him on trial but I am interested in what the Lannisters are going to do next.
10/29/2020 c1
72jman007
I like it needs more detail...For a while now I have been thinking about a Fanfic where Theon convinces the Iron Born to follow him instead of his father...I started it, but other stories took my attention

I like it needs more detail...For a while now I have been thinking about a Fanfic where Theon convinces the Iron Born to follow him instead of his father...I started it, but other stories took my attention
10/23/2020 c4 Guest
So the Mountain is a dead man walking and Edmure got actually did something useful if not foolish. Nice!
So the Mountain is a dead man walking and Edmure got actually did something useful if not foolish. Nice!
10/25/2020 c4
21Rolling Mist 13
I already reviewed this yesterday but it isn't appearing so I rewrote my review.
Is Tywin going to marry Tyrion to Arya? Walder Frey being betrayed by his own family .. interesting. Lannisters are pretty screwed in this current situation. I like how Edmure actually did something of importance :)

I already reviewed this yesterday but it isn't appearing so I rewrote my review.
Is Tywin going to marry Tyrion to Arya? Walder Frey being betrayed by his own family .. interesting. Lannisters are pretty screwed in this current situation. I like how Edmure actually did something of importance :)
10/24/2020 c4
15Andromedanaea
Good Chapter.
But I am not happy about Arya's fate.
I am guessing something like the Red Wedding is in the cards

Good Chapter.
But I am not happy about Arya's fate.
I am guessing something like the Red Wedding is in the cards
9/25/2020 c3 Guest
. ...the Reach's TROOPS arrive he will already HAVE TAKEN King's Landing... ...I have a PROPOSAL for you... or a Proposition. .
. ...the Reach's TROOPS arrive he will already HAVE TAKEN King's Landing... ...I have a PROPOSAL for you... or a Proposition. .
9/25/2020 c2 Guest
...cursing HIMSELF for not... Cat had left THEIR father's bedside... .NO ! Not Arya !?
...cursing HIMSELF for not... Cat had left THEIR father's bedside... .NO ! Not Arya !?
9/21/2020 c3
21Rolling Mist 13
Theon and Marg could be fun. I don't understand how Theon is King of the Iron Islands? I know Yara yelled 'King of the West and Iron Islands in Chapter 1but isn't Balon still alive?

Theon and Marg could be fun. I don't understand how Theon is King of the Iron Islands? I know Yara yelled 'King of the West and Iron Islands in Chapter 1but isn't Balon still alive?
9/18/2020 c3
15Andromedanaea
I love this story!
But I have difficulty understanding how Theon is King of the West, while Asha has the golden throne and how he is King of the Iron Islands, when he hasn't deposed his father yet.

I love this story!
But I have difficulty understanding how Theon is King of the West, while Asha has the golden throne and how he is King of the Iron Islands, when he hasn't deposed his father yet.
9/8/2020 c2
21Rolling Mist 13
I like the first chapter but I loved this one!
Tywin is probably my favourite character so his entry into a story is always a welcome one from my point of view.
Interesting Stannis went for Storm's End not King's Landing straight away? Surely that is a waste of time and resources when he wants the Throne?
Hoster's death felt like a way he would go to be honest.
With the Arya cliff hanger I can only see Tywin coming to the rescue and then the question of who she is to marry will be a hard one.
There are some grammar issues but the story is good :)

I like the first chapter but I loved this one!
Tywin is probably my favourite character so his entry into a story is always a welcome one from my point of view.
Interesting Stannis went for Storm's End not King's Landing straight away? Surely that is a waste of time and resources when he wants the Throne?
Hoster's death felt like a way he would go to be honest.
With the Arya cliff hanger I can only see Tywin coming to the rescue and then the question of who she is to marry will be a hard one.
There are some grammar issues but the story is good :)
9/7/2020 c2
39jean d'arc
Oh, no! Arya! Has Clegane killed her or is he about to?
So many things have happened! Baelish and Tywin have entered the stage, the betrayal and the attack, Cat and Edmure making a run for it, Hoster and Tywin, Arya at the end...
Good chapter!
Thanks

Oh, no! Arya! Has Clegane killed her or is he about to?
So many things have happened! Baelish and Tywin have entered the stage, the betrayal and the attack, Cat and Edmure making a run for it, Hoster and Tywin, Arya at the end...
Good chapter!
Thanks
9/7/2020 c1
21Rolling Mist 13
An interesting restructuring of the board:
Yara has Casterly Rock (Doesn't mean she will have the Westerlands) and will possibly marry Daven Lannister (Joanna's eldest brothers son) who I think is like 5th inline to succeed Tywin. Lets see: 1. Tyrion 2. Kevan 3. Lancel 4. Willem & Martyn (not sure they are alive in this AU as Robb's movements have been altered by Theon's new actions) 6. Daven Lannister ... Not sure he is a great choice if you want to legitimately claim the West but hey you could kill the others XD
Robb has the North and the Riverlands.
Theon potentially has the Iron Islands if he fights through his Father and Uncles.
Dorne & the Vale probably would remain neutral.
The Crown is basically just King's Landing and Tywin's army at Harenhal and with the Tyrell alliance possibly being taken away by Theon they are a bit fucked when Stannis assaults King's Landing even if Tyrion uses the wildfire ...
I wonder who Robb is thinking of marrying?
Great start which flips everything on its head :D

An interesting restructuring of the board:
Yara has Casterly Rock (Doesn't mean she will have the Westerlands) and will possibly marry Daven Lannister (Joanna's eldest brothers son) who I think is like 5th inline to succeed Tywin. Lets see: 1. Tyrion 2. Kevan 3. Lancel 4. Willem & Martyn (not sure they are alive in this AU as Robb's movements have been altered by Theon's new actions) 6. Daven Lannister ... Not sure he is a great choice if you want to legitimately claim the West but hey you could kill the others XD
Robb has the North and the Riverlands.
Theon potentially has the Iron Islands if he fights through his Father and Uncles.
Dorne & the Vale probably would remain neutral.
The Crown is basically just King's Landing and Tywin's army at Harenhal and with the Tyrell alliance possibly being taken away by Theon they are a bit fucked when Stannis assaults King's Landing even if Tyrion uses the wildfire ...
I wonder who Robb is thinking of marrying?
Great start which flips everything on its head :D