for Audax Novus1/21 c1 AKinkyBear
Just wanna say this is by far the most fleshed out, conprehensive, and riveting story I’ve ever read on FanFiction.
No paragraph is misplaced, nothing seems unnatural, and the evolution of characters seem befitting to their canon selves. I read the entirety of this story in two weeks since I discovered it (sometimes staying up all night to my chagrin) and I hope beyond hope that you’re doing well and see to expanding a story that I’ve been compoundly adopting as my lore of this fractured but whole universe.
Truly, you have a great gift and I wish for you to continue it. Bear
Just wanna say this is by far the most fleshed out, conprehensive, and riveting story I’ve ever read on FanFiction.
No paragraph is misplaced, nothing seems unnatural, and the evolution of characters seem befitting to their canon selves. I read the entirety of this story in two weeks since I discovered it (sometimes staying up all night to my chagrin) and I hope beyond hope that you’re doing well and see to expanding a story that I’ve been compoundly adopting as my lore of this fractured but whole universe.
Truly, you have a great gift and I wish for you to continue it. Bear
11/30/2024 c26 Guest
Rewatched halo 4 ending. The didact ranting. I hope hes in the 17 petal space station still salty af
Rewatched halo 4 ending. The didact ranting. I hope hes in the 17 petal space station still salty af
11/29/2024 c26 Guest
Glad to see youre doing good. In this year and the next I hope it countinues to be so. Take care
Glad to see youre doing good. In this year and the next I hope it countinues to be so. Take care
11/29/2024 c25 Guest
Wondering when chief would do his signature crash landings.
1- escape pod
2 - brick
3 - reentry
4 - reentry but asleep
Or was his badass combat dive with his ship in Illium the supposed crash landing?
Wondering when chief would do his signature crash landings.
1- escape pod
2 - brick
3 - reentry
4 - reentry but asleep
Or was his badass combat dive with his ship in Illium the supposed crash landing?
11/28/2024 c15 Arashi Uzukaze
Oohhh Tevos...you're going to be in sooooooo much trouble once John 117 finds out about your deception.
Oohhh Tevos...you're going to be in sooooooo much trouble once John 117 finds out about your deception.
9/10/2024 c25 
2Foundunknown01
Firstly, I've been following this story for the last few years and I want to tell you, its amazing. I'm hoping the next chapter comes out before the end of the year, but otherwise amazing job!
2Foundunknown01Firstly, I've been following this story for the last few years and I want to tell you, its amazing. I'm hoping the next chapter comes out before the end of the year, but otherwise amazing job!
7/28/2024 c16 WirelessDown
I hope you make the asari and salarians the biggest traitors in the galaxy, sitting on the sidelines during the war and then trying to bully everyone else with their remaining military power, but Master Chief blows up NOVA on Thessia and Sur'Kesh. I'm really drawn to exterminating them after all the hints of asari ties to Terminus, secret deals under the negotiating table, political machinations, salarian sabotage, and even possible betrayal of their old allies.
I hope you make the asari and salarians the biggest traitors in the galaxy, sitting on the sidelines during the war and then trying to bully everyone else with their remaining military power, but Master Chief blows up NOVA on Thessia and Sur'Kesh. I'm really drawn to exterminating them after all the hints of asari ties to Terminus, secret deals under the negotiating table, political machinations, salarian sabotage, and even possible betrayal of their old allies.
7/28/2024 c15 WirelessDown
800,000 kilometers... that's way too little. Literally nothing in cosmic terms. If I were to use an Earth-scale analogy, you just said that Two skyscrapers are one meter apart. 3,000 light years from Omega to the Fringe would be 28,382,400,000,000,000 kilometers. The speed of light is 300,000 kilometers per second. From the Earth to the Sun is 149,597,871 kilometers. HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS of kilometers is the distance just within one damn star system. And that's just the average radius. Please, if you're going to give any hard numbers or facts, at least make them believable or relevant to their surroundings. I hope the asari meet a nasty end. I've never liked them. Blue freaks, natural manipulators, and also natural machines for the genocide of entire races through assimilation, if the asari so desires.
800,000 kilometers... that's way too little. Literally nothing in cosmic terms. If I were to use an Earth-scale analogy, you just said that Two skyscrapers are one meter apart. 3,000 light years from Omega to the Fringe would be 28,382,400,000,000,000 kilometers. The speed of light is 300,000 kilometers per second. From the Earth to the Sun is 149,597,871 kilometers. HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS of kilometers is the distance just within one damn star system. And that's just the average radius. Please, if you're going to give any hard numbers or facts, at least make them believable or relevant to their surroundings. I hope the asari meet a nasty end. I've never liked them. Blue freaks, natural manipulators, and also natural machines for the genocide of entire races through assimilation, if the asari so desires.
7/6/2024 c3 Oedon
I have taken the liberty to imagine chief is in his Infinite armor and his H4 armor seeing as it's more aesthetically pleasing thank you for this gem btw I am thoroughly enjoying it as it's hard to find good novels in certain crossovers.
I have taken the liberty to imagine chief is in his Infinite armor and his H4 armor seeing as it's more aesthetically pleasing thank you for this gem btw I am thoroughly enjoying it as it's hard to find good novels in certain crossovers.
6/10/2024 c26 Snorrlacks
So glad that this isn't abandoned I've been holding out hope for this to be continued considering where you left everything off with your last chapter I can't wait to see where this story goes and I will most likely be rereading the whole story again whenever you do decide to post the next chapter due to it being about a year and a half since I've read it but I know you'll do right by the story you've given us so far so thanks for all the hard work and the creative freedom you went with this shared universe, I have been enjoying the ride so far can't wait for more
So glad that this isn't abandoned I've been holding out hope for this to be continued considering where you left everything off with your last chapter I can't wait to see where this story goes and I will most likely be rereading the whole story again whenever you do decide to post the next chapter due to it being about a year and a half since I've read it but I know you'll do right by the story you've given us so far so thanks for all the hard work and the creative freedom you went with this shared universe, I have been enjoying the ride so far can't wait for more
5/14/2024 c2 14Ahsokafanboy1138
I know this has been out for a while but I have my own two cents to add regarding the expectation many of the squadmates should leave their unfinished business unfinished: In A New Hope and Empire Strikes Back, Luke and especially Leia look down on Han for thinking about his debt to Jabba. They refuse to help him with it, and when he decides to handle it himself, it's too late, and his friends need to help him resolve things with Jabba anyway. In Attack Of The Clones, we learn that the Jedi were content to leave Anakin's mother in slavery and tell him to forget her so he can focus on being a Jedi. Anakin mentions how he's now thinking about her, and Obi-Wan tells him to sleep it off. Eventually, he starts going crazy with worry, and he only shows up in time for her to die, severely damaging his relationships with the other Jedi. If you want your friend to have his head in the game, DON'T tell him to ignore his own problems.
14Ahsokafanboy1138I know this has been out for a while but I have my own two cents to add regarding the expectation many of the squadmates should leave their unfinished business unfinished: In A New Hope and Empire Strikes Back, Luke and especially Leia look down on Han for thinking about his debt to Jabba. They refuse to help him with it, and when he decides to handle it himself, it's too late, and his friends need to help him resolve things with Jabba anyway. In Attack Of The Clones, we learn that the Jedi were content to leave Anakin's mother in slavery and tell him to forget her so he can focus on being a Jedi. Anakin mentions how he's now thinking about her, and Obi-Wan tells him to sleep it off. Eventually, he starts going crazy with worry, and he only shows up in time for her to die, severely damaging his relationships with the other Jedi. If you want your friend to have his head in the game, DON'T tell him to ignore his own problems.