for Harry Potter and The Viscount Pimlico9/11/2024 c41 adelgado04291
Good take on the Weasley /Malfoy rivalry. Interesting post office this morning. Loved that last touch with aliens and the address.
Good take on the Weasley /Malfoy rivalry. Interesting post office this morning. Loved that last touch with aliens and the address.
1/2/2024 c41 Guest
A lovely well written tale that is based on canon and yet so very original and believable. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
A lovely well written tale that is based on canon and yet so very original and believable. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
7/28/2023 c41 atymer
LOL LOL LOL I loved then way the author ended the tale. LOL LOL LOL LOL
I was hoping that slim ball wouldn't turn up at a later date. Now I don't have to be concerned. LOL LOL LOL
LOL LOL LOL I loved then way the author ended the tale. LOL LOL LOL LOL
I was hoping that slim ball wouldn't turn up at a later date. Now I don't have to be concerned. LOL LOL LOL
4/30/2023 c14 Guest
Interesting story.
Interesting story.
4/25/2023 c1 bookivore
The first couple of lines were very confusing if you think about canon: where’s the accidental magic squad that cleans up after children’s magical outbursts? Why is it so astonishing that an unknown person is performing magic? Are they capable of tracking every bit of adult magic and who cast it, live? Then how did Sirius get framed, and how did anyone escape the Snatchers when they did any bit of magic in book 7? Probably not issues you want to fix, but the first rule of establishing a mystery is creating logical clues not things that throw the established rules away.
The first couple of lines were very confusing if you think about canon: where’s the accidental magic squad that cleans up after children’s magical outbursts? Why is it so astonishing that an unknown person is performing magic? Are they capable of tracking every bit of adult magic and who cast it, live? Then how did Sirius get framed, and how did anyone escape the Snatchers when they did any bit of magic in book 7? Probably not issues you want to fix, but the first rule of establishing a mystery is creating logical clues not things that throw the established rules away.
11/29/2021 c41 
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Please write a sequel to this story and have Harry be under a love potion by Molly Weasley.
6Yaw6113Please write a sequel to this story and have Harry be under a love potion by Molly Weasley.
12/5/2020 c1 kekbekmekflekwek
So is this some shitty self insert thing? Because Ginny's not even listed in the tags and she's Harry's wife. What the fuck? Way to get around tagging. You know exactly why people look for stories like this, and you went and fucked us. Terrible story, either way.
So is this some shitty self insert thing? Because Ginny's not even listed in the tags and she's Harry's wife. What the fuck? Way to get around tagging. You know exactly why people look for stories like this, and you went and fucked us. Terrible story, either way.
9/8/2020 c41 4Captain Lascelles
Notes from the author:
Inspired by Exile by bennybear.
Inspired by Friends and Foes by Northumbrian.
4Captain LascellesNotes from the author:
Inspired by Exile by bennybear.
Inspired by Friends and Foes by Northumbrian.
9/7/2020 c1 Captain Lascelles
About feuds, from the author:
In canon, Ignatius Prewett married Lucretia Black. One marriage does not end a feud. If you want to see what a real feud is, look up the Hatfields and the McCoys. They are in Wikipedia. There was a marriage between a Hatfield and a McCoy. It stoked up the fires instead of putting them out.
I took my inspiration from how Arthur Weasley reacted to meeting Lucius Malfoy in Diagon Alley in 'Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets' Chapter 4. Arthur is a peaceful man, a ministry official, but in the book, not the movie, he reacted to cheap jibes from Lucius by fighting him in the shop. This is how feuds show up. Ron cant wait to get his wand out and hex Draco. Harry is drawn into the Weasley side without knowing where the heat is coming from on either side.
Thanks for your reviews, please read on.
About feuds, from the author:
In canon, Ignatius Prewett married Lucretia Black. One marriage does not end a feud. If you want to see what a real feud is, look up the Hatfields and the McCoys. They are in Wikipedia. There was a marriage between a Hatfield and a McCoy. It stoked up the fires instead of putting them out.
I took my inspiration from how Arthur Weasley reacted to meeting Lucius Malfoy in Diagon Alley in 'Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets' Chapter 4. Arthur is a peaceful man, a ministry official, but in the book, not the movie, he reacted to cheap jibes from Lucius by fighting him in the shop. This is how feuds show up. Ron cant wait to get his wand out and hex Draco. Harry is drawn into the Weasley side without knowing where the heat is coming from on either side.
Thanks for your reviews, please read on.
9/6/2020 c20 Konnasan
I'm enjoying your story so far but I do have one question. aren't the Weasleys and Malfoys already connected? if I remember cannon correctly a black woman married into the Weasleys (Arthur's mum?) and Narcicia black married Lucious?
I'm enjoying your story so far but I do have one question. aren't the Weasleys and Malfoys already connected? if I remember cannon correctly a black woman married into the Weasleys (Arthur's mum?) and Narcicia black married Lucious?