for Beacon
589/7/2020 c1 carerra.hughes
you had me worried there multiple times about what was going to happen. (don't want to soil anything, but I can think of four spots off the top of my head.) good job!
you had me worried there multiple times about what was going to happen. (don't want to soil anything, but I can think of four spots off the top of my head.) good job!
9/7/2020 c1 Muffins
Beautifully written! I was thoroughly engrossed in the plot and dynamic between the two. The fact that it was equally as somber as it was hopeful had my emotions all over the place. Bravo!
Beautifully written! I was thoroughly engrossed in the plot and dynamic between the two. The fact that it was equally as somber as it was hopeful had my emotions all over the place. Bravo!
9/6/2020 c1 Man vs Bacon
Only read this as thought it was about bacon so my mistake.
Only read this as thought it was about bacon so my mistake.
9/5/2020 c1 A101
Loved this! You did a great job. I kept thinking the ending would be Draco killing her, but I am so glad I was wrong! Your ending was perfect.
Loved this! You did a great job. I kept thinking the ending would be Draco killing her, but I am so glad I was wrong! Your ending was perfect.
9/5/2020 c1 SmileSimplify
Whew! This was heart-pounding in a really anxiety-inducing way. Well done!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
Whew! This was heart-pounding in a really anxiety-inducing way. Well done!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
9/5/2020 c1 Guest
Loved this
Loved this
9/5/2020 c1 Guest
Awesome story!
Awesome story!