for A Team Leader's Self Loathing And Irritation9/28/2020 c3 LuckyPickl3
Writing is ok but needs improvement, I like the fluff and seriously fuck the Guest
Writing is ok but needs improvement, I like the fluff and seriously fuck the Guest
9/5/2020 c3 Guest
Trash writing, short chapter, asshole author.
Why are you still trying?
Trash writing, short chapter, asshole author.
Why are you still trying?
9/6/2020 c1 
30The-Prodigious-One
ToSuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
I know really and I'm sorry I know it makes it hard to understand the dialogue that way for sure but I'm kinda stuck in a rut at this point of my life and I don't know if I have to start fixing my writing style first or fix some other parts of my life first but I appreciate that you would take the time to review even if it was just to bring a detail to my attention.
30The-Prodigious-OneToSuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
I know really and I'm sorry I know it makes it hard to understand the dialogue that way for sure but I'm kinda stuck in a rut at this point of my life and I don't know if I have to start fixing my writing style first or fix some other parts of my life first but I appreciate that you would take the time to review even if it was just to bring a detail to my attention.