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9/24/2021 c6 Guest
So basically you made the EXTREMELY LETHAL FACELESS MAN get raped all because of a lost knife.. that's not fixing the series, that's screwing it up further. We already know faceless men can kill with ANYTHING and she has zero interest in sex let alone letting a frey bone her. The massacre of the freys not happening, sure that's believable. But arya not only getting raped but not killing her rapist in revenge.. and then telling him her she really was?

Yeah. No. Might as well delete this chapter or the story itself cause you just screwed up arya's character to a unfixable degree here and that's not even a flame. That's a fact most will agree on. Seriously, why go this route if you knew it wouldn't work unless you simply wanted arya to get raped for some ungodly reason and knew no one would be able to do so unless you messed with her characterization.

You probably didn't even think through the consequences of going that route either with what you've done here: The frey line will die regardless now. Sansa was raped by ramsey and also lost her virginity in such a way since this is show based. She wants her family back and regrets her previous relationship with arya. She will find out what happened with arya eventually and in response murder all the male freys due to feeling they're no better then ramsey now. She won't care, she'll execute them all if she has too or can't send toops. Meaning you've gone full circle for nothing. And if it doesn't happen? Sansa's character is officially screwed up too.

You need to fix this or your no better then the show you trying to "fix"
9/17/2021 c6 orionastro
what an amazing story so far , lets see when Arya will find nimeria and bring her to winterfel ,so that she can mate with gotsh and birth more Direwolves , can hardly wait for the next chapters
8/9/2021 c6 2jelpy1
Enjoying the fic still, but I 100% think Arya would have slit Elmer's throat without hesitation.
8/9/2021 c4 jelpy1
Oh Dear. I am enjoying your story but I MUST slow down. IN chapter 4 I read "It made Jon wonder about where Sam and Gilly and how her son was faring in the south." as "It made Jon wonder about where Sam and Gilly and how her son was farting in the south." Made a real difference in the meaning.
1/2/2021 c6 4Golden Nova
The part about Arya's sex scene was totally OOC and not a realistic one. She is trained to kill with ANYTHING. Just because she does not have a knife doesnt means she cannot kill him. Also how can she not have any time to react before he goes into her? Yeah. No amount of suspension of belief is gonna do it. Please correct it.
1/1/2021 c6 Molag Vile
Nice to see a new chapter. Has been a while but that’s cool. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
12/13/2020 c5 SvenTheDecoy
you're calling this a fix it? seems like there are several changes without any reasoning given. how the hell did EG get involved in this?
12/13/2020 c3 SvenTheDecoy
ummm, yeah, I'm sorry, but if this is a marriage to secure the north, there should have been a ceremony in the Godswood. NO northern lords tried to protest this?
11/21/2020 c1 Guest
Sansa sucks. She’s a selfish bitch. She deserves to die being raped by Ramsay and then get eaten alive by Direwolves. FUCK SANSA! Anyone who writes pro-Sansa stories should get COVID.
11/20/2020 c5 Molag Vile
Nice chapter man
10/28/2020 c1 Guest
Why have Sansa have a child from Ramsey and why have Jon not be Lyanna's son? (why would Ned pretend Jon is his bastard if he was Brandon's?).
10/27/2020 c4 Molag Vile
Nice chapter overall. Can definitely see many plot lines and opportunities to use different povs. Hopefully that helps with writers block.
10/5/2020 c1 12Andromedanaea
You are already better than that TV show!
9/7/2020 c2 2jzgonz24
I like the premise, Hope to see more soon. Are Selyse and Shireen still dead in this AU.
9/7/2020 c2 Molag Vile
Cool chapter ima read the targ one
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