
9/29/2020 c10
27917brat
I so want to read more of this utter amazing story and can't wait to see just what you have happen next in this. So please keep this up and update again soon as I would seriously love to read more of this wonderful story.

I so want to read more of this utter amazing story and can't wait to see just what you have happen next in this. So please keep this up and update again soon as I would seriously love to read more of this wonderful story.
9/25/2020 c9 Phoenix
Oh my gosh this is so good. I hope so they can change that world around and away from complete darkness. Thanks for the update and I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter
Oh my gosh this is so good. I hope so they can change that world around and away from complete darkness. Thanks for the update and I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter
9/25/2020 c9 123
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9/19/2020 c8 917brat
this is so wonderful and I would really love to read more as this is seriously amazing and only seems to be getting better and better the more you add. Just wow.
this is so wonderful and I would really love to read more as this is seriously amazing and only seems to be getting better and better the more you add. Just wow.
9/18/2020 c8 Zelavian
Personally I do not think Zhanye should get what he wants from Beiyue, His motivations are selfish and Both Riku and Beiyue know it
Though I would be surprised if Beiyue did not go see Dongling to find out what is up after Zhanye's second visit. I would not be surprised if Dongling wants to serve Beiyue again deep down and its directing her actions
Personally I do not think Zhanye should get what he wants from Beiyue, His motivations are selfish and Both Riku and Beiyue know it
Though I would be surprised if Beiyue did not go see Dongling to find out what is up after Zhanye's second visit. I would not be surprised if Dongling wants to serve Beiyue again deep down and its directing her actions
9/16/2020 c8 Phoenix
Oh so interesting. I wonder if he'll get through to his cousin. I'm not sure if I want that or not but it would be interesting. Thanks for the update and I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter
Oh so interesting. I wonder if he'll get through to his cousin. I'm not sure if I want that or not but it would be interesting. Thanks for the update and I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter
9/15/2020 c8 123
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9/15/2020 c7 Phoenix
Oh my gosh so good. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to read where this goes next.
Oh my gosh so good. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to read where this goes next.
9/14/2020 c7 123
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9/14/2020 c6 Phoenix
Oh my gosh this is a great way to end what would be the first Kingdom Hearts. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the update and I hope you are doing well.
Oh my gosh this is a great way to end what would be the first Kingdom Hearts. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the update and I hope you are doing well.