for A Black Wind Howls1/23/2022 c6 travesdaegan
Hi, not to be disrespectful or anything, but what are your plans for gamer deku?
Hi, not to be disrespectful or anything, but what are your plans for gamer deku?
1/1/2021 c3 
1Slovenly
"It's good for sneaking around because you have to be pretty fucking bad at it to make noise." Lmfao!
I'm so glad to see you've updated! I love how you're characterizing Dorji and adding so many unique elements to her character.
I will say though, I'm not sure how I feel about Aang's willingness to learn that suffocating jab. Even if it's only temporary, his character wouldn't be too fond of forcing someone's lungs to empty. He'd probably see it as unnecessary vioence when he could just blow them away or evade their attacks. It defintely fits for Dorji's form of self-defense and general bending style, however! I can see how, for her, that would be a non-lethal compromise between his pacifism and her I'll-do-whatever-I-need-to-do thought process.
Also, I really love how you showed his misgivings about Dorji's way of practicing her airbending. I think that their difference in philoshopy will add a lot of conflict between them even after their fight's resolution, and I think that's really realistic! Can't wait to read more!
1Slovenly"It's good for sneaking around because you have to be pretty fucking bad at it to make noise." Lmfao!
I'm so glad to see you've updated! I love how you're characterizing Dorji and adding so many unique elements to her character.
I will say though, I'm not sure how I feel about Aang's willingness to learn that suffocating jab. Even if it's only temporary, his character wouldn't be too fond of forcing someone's lungs to empty. He'd probably see it as unnecessary vioence when he could just blow them away or evade their attacks. It defintely fits for Dorji's form of self-defense and general bending style, however! I can see how, for her, that would be a non-lethal compromise between his pacifism and her I'll-do-whatever-I-need-to-do thought process.
Also, I really love how you showed his misgivings about Dorji's way of practicing her airbending. I think that their difference in philoshopy will add a lot of conflict between them even after their fight's resolution, and I think that's really realistic! Can't wait to read more!
12/28/2020 c1 Same Guest
That was a test review.
I'm very impressed. Really, you've created the most underrated and powerful OCs I've ever read. They're like a combination of Toph and Yakone's family (if Amon or Tarrlok had kids): the oldest and youngest are dry badasses and all three generations even casually display bending so powerful everyone else looks like a non-bender. Heck, like Yakone's bloodbending line, they just may be the most powerful benders (of their respective) element we've seen.
That was a test review.
I'm very impressed. Really, you've created the most underrated and powerful OCs I've ever read. They're like a combination of Toph and Yakone's family (if Amon or Tarrlok had kids): the oldest and youngest are dry badasses and all three generations even casually display bending so powerful everyone else looks like a non-bender. Heck, like Yakone's bloodbending line, they just may be the most powerful benders (of their respective) element we've seen.
12/28/2020 c3 Guest
Hello.
Hello.
12/27/2020 c3 Matheus Bezerra de Lima
Amazing concept! I'm looking forward to more chapters and more character development for Dorji! And also Aang and Dorji teaching airbending techniques to each other, Katara learning about healing and Sokka about chi-blocking!
Amazing concept! I'm looking forward to more chapters and more character development for Dorji! And also Aang and Dorji teaching airbending techniques to each other, Katara learning about healing and Sokka about chi-blocking!
9/22/2020 c2 Slovenly
I love this! Dorji sounds adorable and I really like Lhamo’s physical description. Strong girls ftw! Keep up the good work, I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
I love this! Dorji sounds adorable and I really like Lhamo’s physical description. Strong girls ftw! Keep up the good work, I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
9/21/2020 c2 Greycait
Lovely chapter :) I'm glad you went the understanding route with Tsering. It would be easy to understand why she could be upset at him, but this gentle understanding mature response is more what Aang needs.
Lovely chapter :) I'm glad you went the understanding route with Tsering. It would be easy to understand why she could be upset at him, but this gentle understanding mature response is more what Aang needs.
9/20/2020 c1 gossamermouse101
I’m so intrigued by this because in Legend of Korea we get to see a different and more aggressive style of Airbending (sorry if I’m spoiling it) so I’m interested to see how Dorji’s story plays out.
I’m so intrigued by this because in Legend of Korea we get to see a different and more aggressive style of Airbending (sorry if I’m spoiling it) so I’m interested to see how Dorji’s story plays out.
9/12/2020 c1 10Sliksick
As a suggesting for fighting style or inspirations I would suggest Histories Strongest Disciple manga/anime (there is a style there that I recall that would mesh well with aggressive airbending). Otherwise, good start.
10SliksickAs a suggesting for fighting style or inspirations I would suggest Histories Strongest Disciple manga/anime (there is a style there that I recall that would mesh well with aggressive airbending). Otherwise, good start.
9/10/2020 c1 Greycait
I'm loving this idea, actually. I don't read much ATLA fanfics really, but the idea that air nomads did survive makes sense :) And that line... the bending survived, but the spirit didn't. That must seriously hurt both of them.
I'm loving this idea, actually. I don't read much ATLA fanfics really, but the idea that air nomads did survive makes sense :) And that line... the bending survived, but the spirit didn't. That must seriously hurt both of them.
9/10/2020 c1 paradox four
Ok Air Bender That focuses on fighting. In most cases cooling the air is a great idea, they could also heat up the air but keep a cool blanked around them selves tiring the enemy faster while they Keep a cool head.
air cut could be an obtion as it can be a developted from the air swipe. But indtead crescent-shaped wave of compressed air, the of the shape can be made into a edge and cut oppotants. It can be done while bending or by using a blade to make it easier.
Also air skates tiny balls air under the Benders feet. (I bet aang would love the idea.)
A form of air sense which the user sense the air presure to see. It's like how six hear using the vibration from the water to know when a giant shark is heading toward them.
Sound bending in certion ways. such as making sounds louder or less by bending the air through changing throat which what throat singers do.
Air arrow is a idea that a air bender collects all the air in their lungs and fire from the mouth. Which can be fatal if done unpoperly and could accidentally cut your tounge in half.
I have a few more but this getting too Long already.
Ok Air Bender That focuses on fighting. In most cases cooling the air is a great idea, they could also heat up the air but keep a cool blanked around them selves tiring the enemy faster while they Keep a cool head.
air cut could be an obtion as it can be a developted from the air swipe. But indtead crescent-shaped wave of compressed air, the of the shape can be made into a edge and cut oppotants. It can be done while bending or by using a blade to make it easier.
Also air skates tiny balls air under the Benders feet. (I bet aang would love the idea.)
A form of air sense which the user sense the air presure to see. It's like how six hear using the vibration from the water to know when a giant shark is heading toward them.
Sound bending in certion ways. such as making sounds louder or less by bending the air through changing throat which what throat singers do.
Air arrow is a idea that a air bender collects all the air in their lungs and fire from the mouth. Which can be fatal if done unpoperly and could accidentally cut your tounge in half.
I have a few more but this getting too Long already.
9/9/2020 c1 Guest
Pretty good
Pretty good