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12/1/2020 c5 1TheReckless1One
Don't feel bad. I'm sure most readers are all on Ao3 because that's where DesuVult123 posts his works. But as much as I love making fun of the fact that a quarter of all Rwby fanfics are smut and a fifth of its fan art is porn (this is the same fandom that asked the writers and VA's if Yang's arm had a vibration function), I really liked this chapter.

Almost afraid Qrow was gonna bite the dust (not the Magitek one, the real dust) for a second. Looks like he lives to fight another day unless SAM has some RoboCthulu venom he hit him with.

Trying to think of ways to beat SAM, so far I got nothing, but that's mainly because how can one fight an AI program allied with Extrademinsional beings that can warp the thin fabric of reality. Only way I can think of is if another Hexagon pops up and they push him and maybe Emma into it. Who knows maybe they can end up in NightVale and SAM can become the District Attorney.

So I'm guessing SAM knows that Salem probably would try to kill him later, and I doubt Salem would let SAM do anything too damaging to her plans. That's the fun part of villain team ups, they always got a knife ready to go into the other's back. Ozpin is gonna have an aneurism learning all this new info. Any chances team ship bait is gonna get involved... and I wonder what excruciating death awaits Sun.

Excellent chapter as always. Looking forward to where it goes.
10/28/2020 c4 TheReckless1One
My concerns for No Code-
1- They go bankrupt in like five years or half its staff ends up with crunch culture allegations, lay offs and sex scandals (cough, Rooster Teeth, cough) and shuts down. Leading to a game series that died in it's prime.
2- They drop the ball, the series becomes as muddled and confusing as the Alien franchise, and it keels over.
3- Some well off company comes in and buys it off their hands, and completely butchers it or mixes into their own products. Who knows, maybe that's where the Precursors ran to when the Forerunners chased them off.

Other than that this was an excellent chapter; so now Sam/Devlin has become this Grimm Lovecraftian thing which probably drag more people back to Saturn's purgatory, Emma is now free from Space Satan's control, and Ozpin has ANOTHER thing to deal with. Time for Emma to teach Nuclear Physics to Pietro. Looking forward to your next chapter.
9/26/2020 c3 Guest
I guess Ozpin thinks she is a Maiden thus the reason he's about to tell he the maiden truth. To bad for him he's wrong and this might endanger humanity.
9/21/2020 c3 TheReckless1One
It would be interesting to see how these Eldritch abominations with reality warping powers mesh into the world of Remnant. Their end goal seemed rather mysterious, so what could they possibly gain from having multiple versions of Emma and Sam deal with surviving that craziness. I wonder how Ozpin would take learning of the Hexagonal Cthulu compared to his own horny gods (wink). Would he wonder if they are another lost deity. Perhaps he even has some history on this entity, having dealt with it in the past.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/20/2020 c3 Guest
So because Ozpin thought someone has two semblances he's telling him his version of the truth of the world, I thought he would ask if they want a position to his school as a staff member or spy on them for a bit. I wonder how he would react if he discovers they are in truth a servant to eldritch gods who have some sinister plan for all of mankind, I mean sure he's also technically a servant to gods as well but atleast they act humanish, their gods are more of the kind that have zero human qualities and trying to understand them will probably result in insanity.
9/15/2020 c2 Guest
I've seen the game on Youtube and I had no idea what the fuck was going on, still don't. Do you what happend cause I won't be able to get into this if I don't know the important crap.
9/15/2020 c2 Guest
Well they are malevolent as they was told to bring more sacrifices to the aliens, gods, Lovecraftian interdimensional horrors? Im not really sure what they they are. They even has every bit of humanity stripped away with zero emotions or morals, nothing more then a husk, a obedient slave to beings beyond mortal comprehension.
9/15/2020 c2 TheReckless1One
And thus, Emma/SAM just made themselves known. Observation is such a great game with an amazing story line. Seriously how can these independent companies with limited funding create masterpieces of work, yet multibillion dollar media conglomerates create garbage. And then once these companies get their payday the franchises get sloppy. Just look at The Boys. The comic and webseries does an excellent job describing issues of power dynamics, corporate greed, misogyny and moral grayness. Yet Marvel thought putting Doc Ock in Spiderman's body was a good idea, or DC thought CGI would make Superman's mustache unnoticeable.

Excellent work. Looking forward to more.
9/14/2020 c1 Guest
We need more, MORE I SAY!
9/10/2020 c1 Alby199800
Yeah Observation is very good... that atmosphere wow... well i am curious to see where this story will go.

I will wait the next chapter with bated breath.
9/9/2020 c1 TheReckless1One
Okay, an excellent start to the the first Observation crossover fic ever. I'm gonna have to watch some youtube videos and play the game to fully understand.. but this game seemed like H.P. Lovecraft mixed with Philip K. Dick. So chances of fully understanding the game, will be very slim. That said, great idea. I'm gonna also make some history as one of the first to comment on an Observation Crossover fic. Looking forward to more.

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