
10/27/2020 c9
1PurpleBunny5540
I like this title a LOT better. I didn’t like the first one either tbhjust the story...oooh interesting twist at the end...

I like this title a LOT better. I didn’t like the first one either tbhjust the story...oooh interesting twist at the end...
10/27/2020 c9 Callum Runchman
How does Rose not realise she's practically torturing Percy with her betrayal. Hell never forgive her if she keeps this up
How does Rose not realise she's practically torturing Percy with her betrayal. Hell never forgive her if she keeps this up
10/26/2020 c9 ItsYaBoi325
Epic chapter! And great as always! Title Idea: Dancing with Darkness! It may seem Cliche but it's like the only thing I can come up with lmao! Anyways, Hades... is like, Wow! I did not expect him as I read I thought it eas fonne be Kronos or something! Cya in the next one
Epic chapter! And great as always! Title Idea: Dancing with Darkness! It may seem Cliche but it's like the only thing I can come up with lmao! Anyways, Hades... is like, Wow! I did not expect him as I read I thought it eas fonne be Kronos or something! Cya in the next one
10/3/2020 c6 BJack12
Can you write longer chapters? I like the story and how it’s progressing so far, but you cut it off too soon! Sorry for the lack of reviews- I’ve been slammed with homework this week and I haven’t had much free time. Keep up the good work!
Can you write longer chapters? I like the story and how it’s progressing so far, but you cut it off too soon! Sorry for the lack of reviews- I’ve been slammed with homework this week and I haven’t had much free time. Keep up the good work!
10/3/2020 c6 PurpleBunny5540
Im sorry I didn’t read your updates sooner... school is busy, so I haven’t had much spare time. (I ship Ethan and Rose) can’t wait for the next one!
Im sorry I didn’t read your updates sooner... school is busy, so I haven’t had much spare time. (I ship Ethan and Rose) can’t wait for the next one!
10/2/2020 c6 ItsYaBoi325
I FLIPPING KNEW IT! Rethan? Eose? Nakamose? Jethan? I WILL FIND A SHIP NAME! Anyways, This story is awesome as always and you are a great author!
I FLIPPING KNEW IT! Rethan? Eose? Nakamose? Jethan? I WILL FIND A SHIP NAME! Anyways, This story is awesome as always and you are a great author!
9/29/2020 c4 PurpleBunny5540
I do wonder how Ethan joined. I guess this explanation is as good as any. Thanks for the change in POV! It was a nice refresher! Can’t wait for your next update
I do wonder how Ethan joined. I guess this explanation is as good as any. Thanks for the change in POV! It was a nice refresher! Can’t wait for your next update
9/28/2020 c4 BJack12
Nice chapter as usual. Could you make them longer in the future though? I really want to see Percy face his sister because she deserves it. I still don’t get how she would drop her loyalties to family for Luke?! Best friend vs twin brother? Anyways, God bless and I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
Nice chapter as usual. Could you make them longer in the future though? I really want to see Percy face his sister because she deserves it. I still don’t get how she would drop her loyalties to family for Luke?! Best friend vs twin brother? Anyways, God bless and I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
9/28/2020 c4 ItsYaBoi325
OH YEAH ETHAN BABY! And lukose ( Luke rose) platonic? Bruh this story is so awesome I love it!
OH YEAH ETHAN BABY! And lukose ( Luke rose) platonic? Bruh this story is so awesome I love it!
9/23/2020 c3 BJack12
Nice chapter! Sorry for cussing, I’ll try not to; it’s just that Rose made me mad when she left by Percy. I’m looking forward to her next encounter with Percy. God bless and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Nice chapter! Sorry for cussing, I’ll try not to; it’s just that Rose made me mad when she left by Percy. I’m looking forward to her next encounter with Percy. God bless and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
9/21/2020 c3 PurpleBunny5540
It was good! I like where you’re headed, especially with the little bit of conflict we’re getting, can’t wait!
It was good! I like where you’re headed, especially with the little bit of conflict we’re getting, can’t wait!