
5/16 c4
7Spartastic 4
Shit, I haven’t read this since this chapter was released… time to catch up

Shit, I haven’t read this since this chapter was released… time to catch up
5/15 c32 Ardyn 1997
The conversation with Zexion and Liara about her mother and Ansem had already happened a few chspters ago.
Why are they repeating that conversation as if it never happened?
The conversation with Zexion and Liara about her mother and Ansem had already happened a few chspters ago.
Why are they repeating that conversation as if it never happened?
4/16 c50 Guest
This story has no right to be this good
This story has no right to be this good
3/1 c50
1Praetus Azrael Antairian
well done clever use of fragmentary passage, and hell yah shepard learned gravity magic

well done clever use of fragmentary passage, and hell yah shepard learned gravity magic
3/1 c50 Guest
Yes!
Yes!
3/1 c50 keybladelight
Well never thought I will see Aqua in the story and since it take place in KH 0.2 before KH2 and ME2 arcs well hope that Shepard is the one that return to the realm of light and Aqua still stay in the realm of darkness to be connected to KH3 so that anti-aqua appear in it.
But can wait for Aqua meet Roxas thar look like his friend Ventus.
Well never thought I will see Aqua in the story and since it take place in KH 0.2 before KH2 and ME2 arcs well hope that Shepard is the one that return to the realm of light and Aqua still stay in the realm of darkness to be connected to KH3 so that anti-aqua appear in it.
But can wait for Aqua meet Roxas thar look like his friend Ventus.
3/1 c50 Bucio
Well, that was entertaining, with Aqua during her time in the Realm of Darkness, just when it was starting to take its toll on her, meeting Shepard, who seems to be damaged/affected by her stay in that place, because besides her amnesia, the way you describe her, for some reason reminds me of Ranni
And it is through starting to move and fight together that Jane starts to recover her memories, powers and abilities (having any weapon she needs at hand is new), mmm, the more Shepard recovers, would the fractures that Aqua describes in her decrease?
Being after overcoming what is Aqua's prelude to KH3 (although here we are barely at the almost beginning of the respective second parts of KH and ME), where they learn a little about each other, about what they see in the illusions; This is when Roxas and Xion have their vision of Shepard, while she seems to recognize them, hearing their voices
At least this time Aqua doesn't go through it alone, with her and Shepard supporting each other
Good luck and keep it up
Well, that was entertaining, with Aqua during her time in the Realm of Darkness, just when it was starting to take its toll on her, meeting Shepard, who seems to be damaged/affected by her stay in that place, because besides her amnesia, the way you describe her, for some reason reminds me of Ranni
And it is through starting to move and fight together that Jane starts to recover her memories, powers and abilities (having any weapon she needs at hand is new), mmm, the more Shepard recovers, would the fractures that Aqua describes in her decrease?
Being after overcoming what is Aqua's prelude to KH3 (although here we are barely at the almost beginning of the respective second parts of KH and ME), where they learn a little about each other, about what they see in the illusions; This is when Roxas and Xion have their vision of Shepard, while she seems to recognize them, hearing their voices
At least this time Aqua doesn't go through it alone, with her and Shepard supporting each other
Good luck and keep it up
3/1 c50
8Jebest4781
Chapter turned out well and hopefully the next entry will go smoothly in the development process.

Chapter turned out well and hopefully the next entry will go smoothly in the development process.
2/28 c49 Buildingcross
more chapters please, they are drama filled and amazing as alwasy thank-you for creating this series!
more chapters please, they are drama filled and amazing as alwasy thank-you for creating this series!