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3AvydReedrVery good, very touching. I'd stretch it out a bit describing the surroundings, but otherwise very well done.
9/13/2020 c1 6XxBATxXThat was good. If you continue or edit/rewrite this, i would add how he died and stuff like that. Otherwise it was good
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