for Vow of the King8/31 c3 Smh
No zangetsu is devious work.
No zangetsu is devious work.
7/15 c37 
4Chaos Snow Kitsune
Hmm... now that you mention Uryu doesn't kill anyone else as far as I am aware. Although he certainly tried to kill Mayuri in his fight. Though I can't really blame him for that one.
Also lol on Kon being called Kai. I'm not surprised Kairomaru doesn't like sharing a name with Kon.
4Chaos Snow KitsuneHmm... now that you mention Uryu doesn't kill anyone else as far as I am aware. Although he certainly tried to kill Mayuri in his fight. Though I can't really blame him for that one.
Also lol on Kon being called Kai. I'm not surprised Kairomaru doesn't like sharing a name with Kon.
6/12 c41 Detached-Emotions
I really enjoy all the chapters you've put out so far! Looking forward for the eventual continuation of the story!
I really enjoy all the chapters you've put out so far! Looking forward for the eventual continuation of the story!
6/10 c6 1aitor.rosell.torralba
No zangetsu for no reason makes it a hard read for me, for alternative zanpakuto is always better to make an OC be he wielder, It is possible to make an lt zanpakuto with Ichigo but you need a reason and to make the whole story about that. Reason is that zangetsu is not so much a different character as he is a part of Ichigo personality
1aitor.rosell.torralbaNo zangetsu for no reason makes it a hard read for me, for alternative zanpakuto is always better to make an OC be he wielder, It is possible to make an lt zanpakuto with Ichigo but you need a reason and to make the whole story about that. Reason is that zangetsu is not so much a different character as he is a part of Ichigo personality
6/9 c10 Chu-chu27
I just can't continue the story. I was fine with Candice and Bambietta being introduced early but Tatsuki is honestly not a good addition to the main cast. She should have been left behind on Earth.
The story was great when it was just Ichigo and Nemu, that was the highlight of this entire fic. They were the main reason why I read and enjoyed it. It's just a shame it's so grating to read Tatsuki and Orihime's paragraphs that I can't force myself to continue. I'll take any label I'm put on but girl on girl stuff is just not my cup of tea. It kills stories for me.
Thanks for the enjoyment so far and wish you the best in your future work.
I just can't continue the story. I was fine with Candice and Bambietta being introduced early but Tatsuki is honestly not a good addition to the main cast. She should have been left behind on Earth.
The story was great when it was just Ichigo and Nemu, that was the highlight of this entire fic. They were the main reason why I read and enjoyed it. It's just a shame it's so grating to read Tatsuki and Orihime's paragraphs that I can't force myself to continue. I'll take any label I'm put on but girl on girl stuff is just not my cup of tea. It kills stories for me.
Thanks for the enjoyment so far and wish you the best in your future work.
6/9 c6 XxMoonDrakexX
This isn't here to insult the author or the ff but I think you just ruined my ff experience by bit adding main girl Ureheme to the harem. I can understand not adding tatsuki but you made you made her lesbian an she took Ureheme. But overall I enjoyed this ff up to now Good luck to the rest of the readers from here.
This isn't here to insult the author or the ff but I think you just ruined my ff experience by bit adding main girl Ureheme to the harem. I can understand not adding tatsuki but you made you made her lesbian an she took Ureheme. But overall I enjoyed this ff up to now Good luck to the rest of the readers from here.
6/3 c32 3Pinkypi
Then some bankai are true basic bitches like Ichigo's. Which doesn't give him anything but a physical power up. Not even his special attack changed unless you count how the hollow could curve the thing which I don't think Ichigo even used properly. Obviously this isn't counting his "true" zapakuto form he got later.
3PinkypiThen some bankai are true basic bitches like Ichigo's. Which doesn't give him anything but a physical power up. Not even his special attack changed unless you count how the hollow could curve the thing which I don't think Ichigo even used properly. Obviously this isn't counting his "true" zapakuto form he got later.
5/20 c41 ElementalMaster16
Awesome chapter! I had a blast re-reading the story to this (temporary), conclusion. I look forward to seeing more when you get back around to it.
Awesome chapter! I had a blast re-reading the story to this (temporary), conclusion. I look forward to seeing more when you get back around to it.
4/23 c39 3denbob
It has only been stated that Shinigami Zanpaktou can only purify the sins of the Hollows. It is never stated it can purfiy the sins of mortals in genral.
And it is explicitly stated that in the hell chapter that Shinigami with captain level spirt grad can’t stay in the Soul Socity because theor reshi is too condensed to be assimilated into the environment and thus creating a in balance between fhe worlds that allows the Maws of Hell to Open up.
So I fail to see how this is an excuse when it just adds more world buiding on top of brutally deconstructing the entire concept of the balance of souls.
3denbobIt has only been stated that Shinigami Zanpaktou can only purify the sins of the Hollows. It is never stated it can purfiy the sins of mortals in genral.
And it is explicitly stated that in the hell chapter that Shinigami with captain level spirt grad can’t stay in the Soul Socity because theor reshi is too condensed to be assimilated into the environment and thus creating a in balance between fhe worlds that allows the Maws of Hell to Open up.
So I fail to see how this is an excuse when it just adds more world buiding on top of brutally deconstructing the entire concept of the balance of souls.
4/21 c41 3EliteOtaku111
I am gonna say you did a good job on this arc, with the changes, additions and removals, and the story overall, even thought you wont end the story yet, but simply take a break due to focusing on your other stories, which I respect and understand.
You sure know to make good choices and changes in the story, to make it better and without changing it too much.
If you need some help for the next arcs, I may I an idea. It isnt much, and with what you said in the authors note, I am unsure it will fit or not.
As I said, I sure enjoyed this interesting story, and wish you luck on your other stories.
3EliteOtaku111I am gonna say you did a good job on this arc, with the changes, additions and removals, and the story overall, even thought you wont end the story yet, but simply take a break due to focusing on your other stories, which I respect and understand.
You sure know to make good choices and changes in the story, to make it better and without changing it too much.
If you need some help for the next arcs, I may I an idea. It isnt much, and with what you said in the authors note, I am unsure it will fit or not.
As I said, I sure enjoyed this interesting story, and wish you luck on your other stories.
4/21 c41 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Good work! Looking forward to your eventual return after your hiatus.
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkGood work! Looking forward to your eventual return after your hiatus.