
51m c10
4Bryanicus
Just a little bit of a fact to put out there. The curse series for all heroes is a system the weapons use to stop the heroes from killing themselves when they're pushed into harsh circumstances, either way I'm looking forward to future updates.

Just a little bit of a fact to put out there. The curse series for all heroes is a system the weapons use to stop the heroes from killing themselves when they're pushed into harsh circumstances, either way I'm looking forward to future updates.
1/19 c1 Guest
did you know that if you search "boring as fuck fanfiction" on Google your story is one of the fist to show up?
did you know that if you search "boring as fuck fanfiction" on Google your story is one of the fist to show up?
1/18 c10
7Blu3b3rryT3a
Aw, all the trial and error!
I approve!
Naofumi is going to have an interesting time figuring things out.
Best of luck out there!

Aw, all the trial and error!
I approve!
Naofumi is going to have an interesting time figuring things out.
Best of luck out there!
1/15 c4 Ehhh
That was some pathetic railroading.
That was some pathetic railroading.
1/2 c9 SentinalSlice
Woo! A new chapter! I’m looking forward to more use of the shield’s intricacies. I’d like to see Naofumi eventually craft a shield for her shield to copy. Something with sharp edges to give her more attack stats. There are real life blades shields. Look up lantern shields for a historical example.
Woo! A new chapter! I’m looking forward to more use of the shield’s intricacies. I’d like to see Naofumi eventually craft a shield for her shield to copy. Something with sharp edges to give her more attack stats. There are real life blades shields. Look up lantern shields for a historical example.
1/1 c9 OechsnerC
Awesome update. Really enjoyed reading this chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Awesome update. Really enjoyed reading this chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
12/31/2020 c9
7Blu3b3rryT3a
Aw, they're getting along~!
Raphtalia is so dang cute, the hair cut would suit her.
Yes, empowerment through stabbing things!
Good Bait, good boy!
Best of luck out there and happy New Year!

Aw, they're getting along~!
Raphtalia is so dang cute, the hair cut would suit her.
Yes, empowerment through stabbing things!
Good Bait, good boy!
Best of luck out there and happy New Year!
11/27/2020 c8
1setokayba2n
The story is good and interesting but seriously, after only two weeks you put the story in hiatus?

The story is good and interesting but seriously, after only two weeks you put the story in hiatus?
11/6/2020 c8 Robbie2413
So it was her future self who gave her the knowledge she got during the trial and made her eyes red as a result. You know it would be funny if she made a pact with a dragon like in Fire Emblem and got the Exalt brand of Naga as a result. So nice thing you did there with the monster pet Balloon Bait. I think I saw something similar with a kid Naofumi on Wattpad.
So it was her future self who gave her the knowledge she got during the trial and made her eyes red as a result. You know it would be funny if she made a pact with a dragon like in Fire Emblem and got the Exalt brand of Naga as a result. So nice thing you did there with the monster pet Balloon Bait. I think I saw something similar with a kid Naofumi on Wattpad.
11/5/2020 c7 Robbie2413
Pretty good chapter overall. Finally Raphtalia is here!
So spelling errors
"the nose is similar to a whoopee cushion deflating" change 'nose' - 'noise'
Pretty good chapter overall. Finally Raphtalia is here!
So spelling errors
"the nose is similar to a whoopee cushion deflating" change 'nose' - 'noise'