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11/20/2020 c11 BigRig2.0
I'm out
11/20/2020 c11 Alcov
I could see hydra or shield or something alike knowing about the magical world and kidnapping family’s for brainwashing/experiments/info on magical goings on.
Probably hydra if they allied with Voldemort
11/20/2020 c11 Moi
Interesting twist with the dissapearances. Are you planning on rituals that include MCU components like that plant Ego left behind the Denny's? Also, if you're open to suggestions, please don't nerf the MC for plot reasons. Making him only effective at range or adding other limitations is fine but having him suddenly lose to lower grade opponents after overcoming someone strong or spiral into moral and emotional drama that debiliates him has been overdone in other fics. And poorly at that. So please dodge that crap. Thank you for listening to my ted talk
11/20/2020 c11 legendaryNOT
Well this is ominous
11/20/2020 c11 Morkail
Wow so every muggle borne who goes to the school has like. 1/20 chance of just vanishing in to thin air that’s fucking crazy but honesty does fit in to the lore of Harry Potter it always bugged the crap out of me how Harry and friends just ignored how ok everyone was with risking there lives and others.
11/20/2020 c11 entron
Thanks for the chapter, I enjoyed it. Have a good week
11/20/2020 c11 Flygar
...Is this an evil Dumbledore, because I find it hard to believe he'd just let things lie if students and families were getting snatched like this. And since its MCU, I'm guessing they either were recruited or killed/experimented on
11/20/2020 c11 12Sultan Asil Arslan-Hiatus
Why did they simply decide that wizards did it? There is the mother fucking HYDRA infested SHIELD! And he needs better equipment. Like a horned serpent jewel! And considering this is MCU does wizards have any past with Asgard?
11/20/2020 c11 Silber D. Wolf
Great
11/20/2020 c11 2Xero the Reaper
Be VERY careful with making oreginal plots. Worst case senario it gets forgoten and becomes an abandoned arc, or it turns out as something stupid. Even worser case senario you make yet ANOTHER plot that either contredicts the previus ones, or they all get so mangled where the reader can't understand what even is going on anymore.
11/20/2020 c11 10FractiousDay
While I’m not necessarily finding the direction objectionable i would encourage you to be careful about the wizards passivity. If they’re merely acted on and not acting as has apparently been the case so far that would be most frustrating
11/20/2020 c11 The Apex Predator 01
Great new chapter
11/19/2020 c10 Guest
ahhh like all great fanfics it just stops at the juicy parts
11/19/2020 c1 Guest
yo this is kick ass he might have a vibranium wand now lol
11/19/2020 c10 Guest
Thanks for the chapter and I hope you would not abandon it like others... And the spelling is "founders" not "funders"
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