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10/19/2020 c5 Glmo11
what wandless can be traced.?
10/19/2020 c5 10FractiousDay
‘Fucus’ Is not a word

Some mildly interesting points on world building, imo some of it seems a little off but there’s going to have to be a reasonable amount of that in any crossover

Somewhat disappointing that you seem to be taking him on a fairly orthodox path but sure as you wish

Regarding the chapter in general you might want to use things like this to practice brevity. At least half here could have been boiled down to ‘I bought all necessary things’

But yea in general it’s fine, looking forward to the next one
10/19/2020 c5 M2R
nicee

finally going to Hogwarts. wonder which house he will be sorted.
10/19/2020 c3 2Xero the Reaper
You know... Wizards CAN side-apparate muggles with them. Did Dumbledore lie to him to not give him ideas?
10/19/2020 c5 Guest
Me gusta esperó que sigas así
10/19/2020 c5 Navn Ukjent
Nice chapter again.
10/19/2020 c5 Xero the Reaper
I was feeling very anxious while I was reading this chapter. That's because my greatest fear is that whenever fanfics reach Hogwarts Express, Hermione (Or in lesser cases Delphine or Hannah) suddenly appears and takes over the whole story while the MC turns into a simp.

Even though I hate AU stories with a passion I don't hate this one because neither is the premise behind the AUness stupid nor is the SI's reactions to the AUness unrealistic.
10/19/2020 c5 1scorched halloween
This fic has been great so far! I love full-on HP/MCU crossovers. Too bad most of the time they're dropped less than halfway through. Hope that doesn't happen here...
10/19/2020 c5 Mari Wollsch
lovely, can't wait for more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
10/19/2020 c5 Mage Of Beginning
One way he might be able to beat the trace next summer is leave his wand in his room and went outside to a nearby wood or park and practice his wandless magic, assuming the trace is activated around his home or around his wand
10/19/2020 c5 marlastiano
:)
10/19/2020 c5 King of Alchemy
Make him join ravenclaw
10/19/2020 c5 Hadrian.Caeser
Thank you
10/19/2020 c5 angeli0101
thanks for chapter
10/19/2020 c5 Ascandas
Hehehehe, I’m so hyped for the next chapter, both the express and the sorting at the same time? Awesome. The only things missing are a smoke machine and the imperial march playing when he gets off the express.
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