for Manipulator7/21/2024 c4 Guest
power to play with molecules & the genius makes anime sword. Very logical.
power to play with molecules & the genius makes anime sword. Very logical.
7/8/2024 c14 nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj
"that boy is, what kids call it.. tsundere?" Yeah, I don't buy that whatsoever.
"that boy is, what kids call it.. tsundere?" Yeah, I don't buy that whatsoever.
7/8/2024 c11 nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj
Why is your version of MHA characters keep thinking freaky sh*t like that?
Why is your version of MHA characters keep thinking freaky sh*t like that?
7/7/2024 c11 
1Taryth
Could Nomu be temporarily stopped by constantly destroying the spinal cord. Or find some way to non destructively stop nerve signals.
1TarythCould Nomu be temporarily stopped by constantly destroying the spinal cord. Or find some way to non destructively stop nerve signals.
6/4/2024 c3 SerpentiCat
Actually, regarding energy output of atom fusion, I wonder how would guesswork estimates look like in the cost to output department? Would the output be greater than the input? Under what conditions would that be so? Would Izuku's quirk be able to cover the energy costs by holding onto and recycling the output energy? That would certainly explain the apparent lack of any energy or other requirements for Izuku's quirk to work.
Actually, regarding energy output of atom fusion, I wonder how would guesswork estimates look like in the cost to output department? Would the output be greater than the input? Under what conditions would that be so? Would Izuku's quirk be able to cover the energy costs by holding onto and recycling the output energy? That would certainly explain the apparent lack of any energy or other requirements for Izuku's quirk to work.
6/4/2024 c2 SerpentiCat
"…honestly the fandom of MHA must think that Izuku is a crybaby beta…"
Ewww, the cringe. Not this garbage again! I swear every time I see that alpha/beta male nonsense I have the reaction of a cat who's tail just was solidly rubbed in the wrong direction. That instant bristling, shudder worthy, annoyance at an unpleasant sensation or in this case a remainder about that one unpleasantly popular trope that doesn't really come in contact with reality at any point or from any angle.
Naturally that a concept you mentioned in your response is entirely incorrect doesn't make what you wrote in that response wrong as well. I would say you rather had a point actually. Without a replacement source, Izuku wouldn't have such self-esteem issues if he had an applicable quirk of his own. Actually if he had a quirk powerful enough to hide what it can do like your Izuku does then I reckon that would be quite a solid shield against any quirk discrimination attempts.
As for the story itself, it really isn't all that bad, only some planning oversights by your's Izuku that bother me a little. The concept of his quirk is really quite interesting so unless something truly stupid happens I'm going to read.
"…honestly the fandom of MHA must think that Izuku is a crybaby beta…"
Ewww, the cringe. Not this garbage again! I swear every time I see that alpha/beta male nonsense I have the reaction of a cat who's tail just was solidly rubbed in the wrong direction. That instant bristling, shudder worthy, annoyance at an unpleasant sensation or in this case a remainder about that one unpleasantly popular trope that doesn't really come in contact with reality at any point or from any angle.
Naturally that a concept you mentioned in your response is entirely incorrect doesn't make what you wrote in that response wrong as well. I would say you rather had a point actually. Without a replacement source, Izuku wouldn't have such self-esteem issues if he had an applicable quirk of his own. Actually if he had a quirk powerful enough to hide what it can do like your Izuku does then I reckon that would be quite a solid shield against any quirk discrimination attempts.
As for the story itself, it really isn't all that bad, only some planning oversights by your's Izuku that bother me a little. The concept of his quirk is really quite interesting so unless something truly stupid happens I'm going to read.
5/17/2024 c10 1Devilhunter748
Is possible for him to manipulate the quirk? He can manipulate atams, and the cells in a human body. So that intels that he manipulate the quirk genom, to a point he can manipulate quirk factor with study of course.
1Devilhunter748Is possible for him to manipulate the quirk? He can manipulate atams, and the cells in a human body. So that intels that he manipulate the quirk genom, to a point he can manipulate quirk factor with study of course.
5/15/2024 c12 Apollodorus13
It makes sense you keep nerfing him because you want
Your story go be “exciting” even though you put OP in the description, but for all his genius. You really make him look like an idiot.
He should be completely untouchable within his range. Like even in just this fight vs the fightinng coach, he could have just used wind to redirect attacts, could have shifted the floor slightly to throw someone off balance, could have just hardened the air to use it to step and out maneuver someone while jumping around like Mordo in the MCU.
The fact that you have him constantly gelping others with their quirks and how to use them but have him be this buffoon with his own broken quirk is getting irritating. It wouldnt be so bad if you didnt write in multiple times about what a genius he is who over thinks every possible use for any quirk he encounters but then goes on to neglect his own and he really is.
He hasnt even tried to address his biggest problem yet which is his own mind and nervous system. Upgrade those and his life would be infinitely easier but no, cant do that because then he would be too OP to write about.
Its a fun story overall, just doesnt make sense to make a genius level Midoriya with a quitk obsession like in canon. Only to have him never actually put all those qualities to use with his own quirks.
It makes sense you keep nerfing him because you want
Your story go be “exciting” even though you put OP in the description, but for all his genius. You really make him look like an idiot.
He should be completely untouchable within his range. Like even in just this fight vs the fightinng coach, he could have just used wind to redirect attacts, could have shifted the floor slightly to throw someone off balance, could have just hardened the air to use it to step and out maneuver someone while jumping around like Mordo in the MCU.
The fact that you have him constantly gelping others with their quirks and how to use them but have him be this buffoon with his own broken quirk is getting irritating. It wouldnt be so bad if you didnt write in multiple times about what a genius he is who over thinks every possible use for any quirk he encounters but then goes on to neglect his own and he really is.
He hasnt even tried to address his biggest problem yet which is his own mind and nervous system. Upgrade those and his life would be infinitely easier but no, cant do that because then he would be too OP to write about.
Its a fun story overall, just doesnt make sense to make a genius level Midoriya with a quitk obsession like in canon. Only to have him never actually put all those qualities to use with his own quirks.
5/14/2024 c8 Apollodorus13
He should really consider just severing tendons at a touch with villains. Theyll be fairly easy to heal and can quickly incapacitate
He should really consider just severing tendons at a touch with villains. Theyll be fairly easy to heal and can quickly incapacitate
5/14/2024 c6 Apollodorus13
If he gets OFA and then it continues to pass down for more successors, theyre all gonna basically be pseudo Superman with matter manipulatipn lmao
OP as fuck in that universe
If he gets OFA and then it continues to pass down for more successors, theyre all gonna basically be pseudo Superman with matter manipulatipn lmao
OP as fuck in that universe
5/7/2024 c17 2HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
I hope that you decide to come back to this story soon. It's a great one so far.
2HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NRI hope that you decide to come back to this story soon. It's a great one so far.
5/1/2024 c17 Anti-Virtue
well damn, appears to have died at a perfectly infuriating cliffhangar both here and on AO3, sadge
well damn, appears to have died at a perfectly infuriating cliffhangar both here and on AO3, sadge
4/16/2024 c17 exomatt
What an incredible story! I really enjoyed it, and will remain optimistic about it's eventual return.
If you do not update, you will be surprised by a
THUNDER CROSS SPLIT ATTACK!
What an incredible story! I really enjoyed it, and will remain optimistic about it's eventual return.
If you do not update, you will be surprised by a
THUNDER CROSS SPLIT ATTACK!
3/31/2024 c1 3Detsella Morningdew
Yeah, MHA quirks not being Manton limited really makes for some impressive munchkining. Even if his quirk never grows stronger, he's one of the most dangerous people already.
(Just in case you don't know about Worm, the Manton limit basically means that a power can either affect things inside a body, or nonliving things, depending on the power, never both. And even powers that work internally either work on the user only, or others only. It stops some very common power exploits.)
3Detsella MorningdewYeah, MHA quirks not being Manton limited really makes for some impressive munchkining. Even if his quirk never grows stronger, he's one of the most dangerous people already.
(Just in case you don't know about Worm, the Manton limit basically means that a power can either affect things inside a body, or nonliving things, depending on the power, never both. And even powers that work internally either work on the user only, or others only. It stops some very common power exploits.)