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1/28 c1 29acmabry
Such a wonderful story of healing and redemption between these two. I especially loved how honest you portrayed Hutch when Starsky asked if they were ok - Hutch replying not yet - but getting there. That's so true even in real life when things have happened between two people and the solution isn't automatic. These two still have a road to travel to be good again - but they are traveling it together.
Also loved how you used the breaking of the red ballons to symbolize the destruction of Gillian, Hutch and Starsky. I've always thought that was a powerful symbolism in the episode.
This is such a great story - I absolutely love it. Thanks for sharing the story and thanks for sharing the wonderful memory of your mom...so very special!
10/17/2020 c1 8Paula UK
Indulging myself with a big catch-up this weekend and have arrived here... such a lovely observation of one of my favourite episodes. I'm so glad the fiction prompt spurred you on to give this a final polish and to post it for us all to share.
I wish I could have joined in with your youthful conversation with your mum... my love of the show and the boys was a very solitary thing for me back in the day; thank goodness for the fan fiction and social media we have now. :)
10/4/2020 c1 7KanikaRose
So well written and the symbolism with the feather is so touching !
10/2/2020 c1 18Hutch-is-gorgeous
Beautifully written! It was great seeing a how Hutch and Gillian met story and another thing I loved about your story was your use of the feather.
9/26/2020 c1 Nancy
I had to read this a second time. This was so brilliantly executed. Thank you again for posting this lovely story.
9/25/2020 c1 Olga Veluga
Absolutely an exquisite story, totally consistent and complementary with that episode that we love so much, because it reaffirms that beautiful friendship between the boys that we all long to have and love in them. It is so sad that the serie has not continued, but stories like this one that you wrote, allows us to extend it and enjoy it in our imagination. Thank you very much for sharing it and please, do not stop writing! A very big hug!
9/25/2020 c1 Nancy
This was beautiful and breath taking. I always wondered if Hutch had found the money or if Starsky told him. Gave closer for them and me. Thank you.
9/26/2020 c1 6Hummina
I always though they cut this episode short. There was so much that HAD to go on between them to right the ship again. You did wonderfully, just as I expect it should have gone.
9/26/2020 c1 80Lapfordlass
What a beautiful story. I love the way you weave the story between past and present scenes. The little details of vivid description really capture the mind's eye so that I was right there with Hutch seeing what he was seeing - and with Starsky too. You've managed to create a really emotional piece that shows the depths of their brokenness and yet how they can begin to heal individually and as a partnership. Beautiful.
9/25/2020 c1 74sandybeliever
Oh gosh, gave me goosebumps. Beautiful..
9/25/2020 c1 3mel2932
This was beautiful. I love the way you filled in the missing scenes with tender care. I loved this. Thank you.

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