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11/27/2020 c4 Fallow57
xxXx Kudos xXxx : )
10/19/2020 c4 Ale74
oh i like it, please update it soon
10/17/2020 c4 21katmom
Still sniffing...Padfoot!

What a tapestry of intrigue! And an excellent outcome.

I’m worried about that tracker, though. Watch out, Giselle!

The ring...please for Hermione! Well...she could have them both...!
10/9/2020 c3 katmom
Oh no! How sad!
10/2/2020 c1 welcome007
nicee
10/2/2020 c2 katmom
Such a full chapter! Now I’m worried about Paddy! Thanks for sharing.
9/25/2020 c1 Guest
A lot of the Abrahamical religions do have a part dealing with magic as a part of divine gifts.

So a RC group dealing with magic is no big deal
9/26/2020 c1 katmom
Excellent start. Thanks for sharing.
9/26/2020 c1 pianomouse
This looks amazing, I am really looking forward to going on this journey with you! Thank you for sharing this with us.
9/26/2020 c1 11old-crow
Hi,

First, this is a fantastic start to a story. You gave a bit of background to your OCs. As they appear in the coming chapters, I'd hope to see more.

Regulus is one of those characters that is fun to see in tale. Storytellers generally find creative situations to place him in. It was interesting that the Knights met up with Sirius but choose to not immediately free him. That was a clever twist.

The dream with the gathering with Riddle was enlightening. Everyone's favorite toad made an early appearance. The was a useful technique to tell some backstory; much more elegant than the ever-dreadful *** Flashback*** as it allows the person remembering it to add some self-though-comment about how they felt about it.

A great start.

O-C
9/25/2020 c1 officalfourthwall
Cool idea
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