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6/23/2021 c28 157slytherinsal
cheers!
6/23/2021 c24 6ImUpToNoGood
Loving this story. The storyline is unique, with interesting worldbuilding.

It would be handy to have a cast of characters, with roles and relationships; many are called by more than one name and it is easy to get confused.

One note: there were several instances where it is not clear which character is talking or acting, and the sentence seems to imply the opposite of what previous context would indicate, where you have one person leaving but the sentence says the other person leaves.

Also: You have a few word choice mixups that this chapter:
Retched vomited or gagged. You want wretched, which means unfortunate or miserable.

Regardless of these minor issues, you have captivated me in your world.

Thank you for writing.
6/22/2021 c27 14Freddie Rindklip
Thank you for writing
6/20/2021 c26 Monnbeam
I really like this story and enjoyed reading this chapter apart from one thing you mentioned the Queen of England, however the Queen is not Queen of England but the Queen of Great Britain/ United Kingdom, thank you for sharing
6/19/2021 c27 LBII
Truly Well Done ! Thank you! You have written the latest "Must Read' HP Fan Fiction.
6/19/2021 c27 1Potter Abducted by Penguins
Excellent!
6/19/2021 c27 157slytherinsal
Many thanks; magic and a spiritual story too. what more could one ask for!
6/18/2021 c27 21katmom
Thanks for sharing this adventure with us!
6/18/2021 c3 RedVelvetGrl
Well, I'm done. Good story, but with Sirius dead, I'm just not interested in reading more.
6/18/2021 c26 157slytherinsal
it is easier to ask forgiveness than to gain permission
6/18/2021 c26 21katmom
So much fun!
6/17/2021 c25 157slytherinsal
Go, Millie!
6/17/2021 c25 21katmom
Lovely chapter. Thank you for sharing.
6/16/2021 c24 157slytherinsal
oooh a definite and evil cliffie.
But then, Harry's nearest and dearest are not helpless dweebs ...
6/16/2021 c24 21katmom
Well…definitely a cliffie.
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