for Destiny6/6/2023 c2 EANID
The story looks good but the main characters name Jeffrey just kills it maybe give him a nickname ir smth
The story looks good but the main characters name Jeffrey just kills it maybe give him a nickname ir smth
4/14/2023 c1 Guest
I smirked as I crossed my arms, "Well I am not most people."
Oh fuck off with that "I aM sOmE SpECiaL SnOwFlaKe" bullshit.
Imma be honest, the beginning about the MC spouting about Destiny is one thing, but the way the MC goes about with his pseudo philosophical BS about other people being mindless drones that have no understanding on the value of their own lives just shows how the MC is projecting, immature, judgmental.
Like bruh there are nearly 8 billion people in the world, and I can assure you a good chunk of them are way better adjusted and more selfless than whoever this Jeffrey is, who seems like he's never had a decent conversation with an actual Human being.
I smirked as I crossed my arms, "Well I am not most people."
Oh fuck off with that "I aM sOmE SpECiaL SnOwFlaKe" bullshit.
Imma be honest, the beginning about the MC spouting about Destiny is one thing, but the way the MC goes about with his pseudo philosophical BS about other people being mindless drones that have no understanding on the value of their own lives just shows how the MC is projecting, immature, judgmental.
Like bruh there are nearly 8 billion people in the world, and I can assure you a good chunk of them are way better adjusted and more selfless than whoever this Jeffrey is, who seems like he's never had a decent conversation with an actual Human being.
4/8/2023 c1 kamikazedrew
I'm glad I read the reviews first so I know the last real chapter was from a year ago so I don't follow this dead fic. This isn't the first author to only post fake April's fools chapters on an abanded story for attention.
I'm glad I read the reviews first so I know the last real chapter was from a year ago so I don't follow this dead fic. This isn't the first author to only post fake April's fools chapters on an abanded story for attention.
4/6/2023 c4 The Most ABANDONNED ACCOUNT
The dialogues and the amount of time the MC spends doing monologues is kinda cringe, though
The dialogues and the amount of time the MC spends doing monologues is kinda cringe, though
4/6/2023 c4 The Most ABANDONNED ACCOUNT
I wish I had only found this story when it had 300,000 words or more.
It's gonna be such a pain to have to wait for updates and hope you don't give it up along the way.
Which sucks, because it has so much potential
I wish I had only found this story when it had 300,000 words or more.
It's gonna be such a pain to have to wait for updates and hope you don't give it up along the way.
Which sucks, because it has so much potential
4/5/2023 c1 moose3333
Hate Issei. Scum main character imo. Hopefully you can shape him up into not a complete shitbag
Hate Issei. Scum main character imo. Hopefully you can shape him up into not a complete shitbag
4/5/2023 c1 P34644563
I don't know if baby popped out of a woman and didn't cry and just had a lifeless expression on his face but wasn't dead. my mind would be setting alarm bells off future serial killer.
I don't know if baby popped out of a woman and didn't cry and just had a lifeless expression on his face but wasn't dead. my mind would be setting alarm bells off future serial killer.
4/5/2023 c4 holosagewolf32
Hey he shouldn’t have know. About her grandfather so shouldnt have mentioning that be a red flag?
Hey he shouldn’t have know. About her grandfather so shouldnt have mentioning that be a red flag?
4/5/2023 c4 Guest
“[New DLC unlocked!]
[The Gamer's Lover system has been added!]
[Sexual Aura has been unlocked as a new stat!]
[You now have romantic and Sexual achievements to strive towards!]”
And into the trash it goes.
“[New DLC unlocked!]
[The Gamer's Lover system has been added!]
[Sexual Aura has been unlocked as a new stat!]
[You now have romantic and Sexual achievements to strive towards!]”
And into the trash it goes.
4/2/2023 c1 BruceLeeNagato
I could not help myself and burst out laughing after the dad reminding me of the change da world, my final message, goodbye. meme.
I could not help myself and burst out laughing after the dad reminding me of the change da world, my final message, goodbye. meme.
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