for Ties that Bind: A Harry Potter Story2/25/2024 c1 MagnusFishersen
Are you homophobic? And are you brain dead because JustBored21 didn't copy any story...
Are you homophobic? And are you brain dead because JustBored21 didn't copy any story...
4/8/2022 c1 Guest
Not good my friend. Complete garbage.
Not good my friend. Complete garbage.
9/16/2021 c1 
11ReluctantSidekick
A few notes:
1. There's no flow to this story, like at all. It's as if the exposition was placed into a tumble dryer.
2. "Now," is a bad way to start a paragraph because it makes the story feel like it's being told to the reader instead of them being drawn in.
3. Don't switch to first person for the same reason, also no one in universe would know who Norbert is.
4. The homophobia in your bio is a bad look, do better.
11ReluctantSidekickA few notes:
1. There's no flow to this story, like at all. It's as if the exposition was placed into a tumble dryer.
2. "Now," is a bad way to start a paragraph because it makes the story feel like it's being told to the reader instead of them being drawn in.
3. Don't switch to first person for the same reason, also no one in universe would know who Norbert is.
4. The homophobia in your bio is a bad look, do better.