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9/30/2020 c1 Guest
Break This Up Into Paragraphs. It Makes It Easier To Follow Of You Don't Have To Absorb Everything In A Single Attempt.
9/30/2020 c1 SS V-King
My only suggestion is to break your chapter up into multiple paragraphs. It makes the story easier to follow if you can stop at the end of a paragraph rather than trying to absorb everything in one go.

I wish you good luck and look forward to Future content.
9/29/2020 c1 14RenaJo
You need to add a couple of thousand more words before you call this a chapter

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