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10/20/2020 c1 2k+Hawki
Not too much to say. It admittedly follows a pretty common pattern for this kind of story (child is despondent, reassured by parents). But it's written well - flows well enough, and feels like something that could have easily happened after the cinematic intro. So good job.

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