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5/25 c3 18BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
A very interesting story! I often love reading time travel AUs so I'm looking forward to seeing more on the development of this fic. Nice work so far! I hope this gets continued one day.
12/3/2022 c3 Illuminated
All three chapters were fun. I hope you pick this story back up again someday and write some more.
4/27/2022 c3 LeMoNfOrSaL
Why couldn’t we get more this is great
1/7/2022 c3 3pinyacolada
Oh wow, this story idea is good! I hope you can continue this someday though, author-nim! ;-; I'm looking forward to more Team 7 hehe.
9/10/2021 c3 Kuroshi Ansatsusha87
I love this story! Revenge on Kashi-kun in the last chapter and modified/new wave mission! Please continue when you can?!
9/10/2021 c1 Kuroshi Ansatsusha87
That's freakin priceless! They all got sent to the past because Kiba sneezed, while using chakra, on the scroll! I'll be chuckling about that for a long while!
3/14/2021 c1 Vampire Queenz
Interesthing... Update more ya!
11/15/2020 c3 Yuriflor
What it’s so good! Why you stop? I want more! Great writing, hope you’ll continue!
10/12/2020 c2 21Scott the Wanderer
I left a negative review based on what passes for logic and reason in the Narutoverse in chapter three. I have since been informed that this is a Crack!fic. Boy do I have egg on my face.

I can only comment that the writing style of the author is so good at portraying the normal level of wacky seriousness of the Narutoverse that I assumed this would be a serious fic. This a complete compliment as it is very, very hard to pull off and I give kudos.

As a crack!fic this is actually very good. It doesn't go too overboard in the Crack like some are wont to do. It's not subtle, but it's not overboard. I actually look forward to insane changes that could occur. Though I know Shikamaru is not going to like one of them. That poor bugger could end up Hokage if a few more incidents like the Great Shikamaru Bridge happen.
10/12/2020 c3 malipudding
Haha, I can imagine Naruto moping to Sakura and Sasuke about not getting the Bridge Mission :P

I love Team 10 moping dynamic xD

Also, it would be cool to have a small AN in the next chapter about their kids (an explanation).
As this story can be classified kind of AU, I can imagine them not having had kids yet and not everything has to be canon compliant, so maybe they just traveled back in time in their mid twenties and didn't have kids yet at that point. I don't personally care much, but it seems like a lot of readers are bothered. And Sai and Tsunade weren't there because they were occupied or sth. Temari and Karui weren't thaaat close to Naruto or something ...?

I can imagine 2 random (but trusted) ANBU accidentally coming back with them though. Would be a fun idea, and them causing small ripples somewhere as well. It would make a fun OC side story. Them being like "of course we got involved in Hokage-sama's crazy **** again TT"

Anyway, thanks for the chapter
10/10/2020 c3 AdrianVnz
I think we are going to have a lot of fun with team 10 xD

And i really want to see more of Naruto and Hinata, and Sasuke and Sakura, or rather the reactions (the town and fangirls repectively).
10/10/2020 c3 Scott the Wanderer
And this is where you messed up. Zabuza was a match for Kakashi who is WAY more powerful than Asuma who is almost a match for Ten 10. The Hidden Mist Jutsu also scrambles Sensor abilities as it is filled with chakra. Realistically, Team 10 might survive, but Asuma is dead and so is Tazuna.

Also Asuma would not take a depressed team on a C-rank. That's just asking for three dead genin. He's also completely lazy, so the moment the Demon Brothers show up he'd cut Tazuna loose even if he did take his team on the mission.

Not only that, but you totally messed up from the beginning. Temari should have been in the room as she is a trusted friend and advisor, but Naruto's link to one of the other people Naruto would want to know about the scroll. Sai would also be in the room as he was another trusted friend/advisor. As would Tsunade for the advisor part. Karui might have been invited as well.
10/9/2020 c3 Guest
I’m liking the story so far but one concern I have is... have they forgotten about their kids or something lol?
The majority are parents you would think someone like hinata would have commented on that first?
The two thing I’m looking forward to are if lee will look for whoever gave birth to his son and how choji and karui happened lol.
10/9/2020 c3 5Hecseferblade
Hahahahaha! Can’t wait to see shikamaru badly flirt with temari
10/9/2020 c3 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Not at all what I had in mind for wave but I did enjoy what you did here. I wonder what team seven did while this was going on and how they reacted when they found out. If they found out that is.

It’s always odd when the normal team seven doesn’t take care of wave and the bridge gets named after Naruto.

I wonder how things will go in the other chapters and what other changes you have in mind. I’m also wondering about the bad guys as well. Namely danzo right now since he’s in the village. Just make sure to bring sai in before dealing with bandage guy lol.

I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter when it’s posted to see how things end up going for everyone. I also want to know how things went with Hinata after she beat Neji as well. That’s something that I was hoping for this chapter as well.
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