for An Uninvited Guest
179/7/2021 c7 Guest
Please update
Please update
5/26/2021 c7 Branchkk
Great update/ chapter. You're doing very well with the story. Hope to read more.
Great update/ chapter. You're doing very well with the story. Hope to read more.
4/14/2021 c6 Branchkk
Cool! Glad my ideas helped and looking forward to how the story plays out.
Cool! Glad my ideas helped and looking forward to how the story plays out.
4/11/2021 c6 James Birdsong
Good chapter
Good chapter
3/19/2021 c5 Branchkk
You could spin it where the story coming alive and harry can be shown later lost in a unknown place where a navy shipman died at and he witnessed it. He be taken for witness protection and reveal his name and unknown how he got there.
You could spin it where the story coming alive and harry can be shown later lost in a unknown place where a navy shipman died at and he witnessed it. He be taken for witness protection and reveal his name and unknown how he got there.
3/3/2021 c5 Branchkk
Great story! One idea that is running through my mind. I remember a movie I once watched loooooong ago. The main characters one evil one good because the evil killed the good with his own sentient sword which absorbed the souls dying from the blade. The blade couldn't take his owners so he took both the evil and the good to the future where a new battle took place only this time the good one won. You could play it up with possibly harry dying before he should and both were transferred to the future. Some way ziva met harry which led to voldemort seeking out to eliminate ziva. It's possible hopefully. You don't have to play with the idea. If it stinks you won't hurt my feelings at all. I'm really not that great at writing plots or stories so one guess to another guess. It popped up possibly in my mind.
Great story! One idea that is running through my mind. I remember a movie I once watched loooooong ago. The main characters one evil one good because the evil killed the good with his own sentient sword which absorbed the souls dying from the blade. The blade couldn't take his owners so he took both the evil and the good to the future where a new battle took place only this time the good one won. You could play it up with possibly harry dying before he should and both were transferred to the future. Some way ziva met harry which led to voldemort seeking out to eliminate ziva. It's possible hopefully. You don't have to play with the idea. If it stinks you won't hurt my feelings at all. I'm really not that great at writing plots or stories so one guess to another guess. It popped up possibly in my mind.
3/3/2021 c5 James Birdsong
Nifty
Nifty