for Ideas, Drabbles, and One Shots6/2/2022 c14 Re Lovely Lover
Well that really sucks. I'm one of the ones that wouldve very much preferred she was on the story THAT way.
Ignoring the movie version, the actual book version where Petunia is blonde and obviously younger and quite decent looking in the one pic I found. I wouldnt mind the original version being added in some manner.
A few characters I think were played by older women then what should be. More so if you add in supposedly somewhat slower aging for magic wielders.
Well that really sucks. I'm one of the ones that wouldve very much preferred she was on the story THAT way.
Ignoring the movie version, the actual book version where Petunia is blonde and obviously younger and quite decent looking in the one pic I found. I wouldnt mind the original version being added in some manner.
A few characters I think were played by older women then what should be. More so if you add in supposedly somewhat slower aging for magic wielders.
5/6/2022 c8 Guest
Hello. I want to stay anonymous, so I am writing this from here. In A Gamer Adventure, on chapter 88, you made a mistake about the companion progress.
Protagonist did the necessary stuff for progress, both physical and emotional (based on previous chapters), yet no progress happened. I also did not see any author note explaining why it did not happen.
I thought you should know. Aside from this, it is going great. Thanks for the story.
Hello. I want to stay anonymous, so I am writing this from here. In A Gamer Adventure, on chapter 88, you made a mistake about the companion progress.
Protagonist did the necessary stuff for progress, both physical and emotional (based on previous chapters), yet no progress happened. I also did not see any author note explaining why it did not happen.
I thought you should know. Aside from this, it is going great. Thanks for the story.
5/4/2022 c12 Guest
This story is so good that every few months, I come here to read these 4 chapters.
I really really hope that one day you will publish this story on a free site for poor people too.
This story is so good that every few months, I come here to read these 4 chapters.
I really really hope that one day you will publish this story on a free site for poor people too.
2/6/2022 c14 Guest1139
Except that it's unfinished and barely a teaser, which means you were going to split it over two chapters, making ANOTHER unnecessary cliffhanger. You really need to stop doing that!
People read because they want to read the story. Constantly pissing them off with all the cliffhangers has probably lost you more readers than you can imagine!
Except that it's unfinished and barely a teaser, which means you were going to split it over two chapters, making ANOTHER unnecessary cliffhanger. You really need to stop doing that!
People read because they want to read the story. Constantly pissing them off with all the cliffhangers has probably lost you more readers than you can imagine!
11/1/2021 c14 justafan
nice chapter and harry should give molly at least five more kids lol.
nice chapter and harry should give molly at least five more kids lol.
9/12/2021 c14 
6thunderofdeath97
hoenstly i don't really understand some people
they make molly her unattractive book or movie part, yet they can turn around and give hermione a milf pornstars body? or give her such a personality change, and nothing is said or done about it? morons, lol
6thunderofdeath97hoenstly i don't really understand some people
they make molly her unattractive book or movie part, yet they can turn around and give hermione a milf pornstars body? or give her such a personality change, and nothing is said or done about it? morons, lol
9/5/2021 c14 GhostNova1
So harry isn't going to do the deed with Molly then. I was looking forward to that chapter
So harry isn't going to do the deed with Molly then. I was looking forward to that chapter
9/5/2021 c1 Guest
Are you going to continue A New Order ?
Are you going to continue A New Order ?
9/5/2021 c14 3greenarrow679
I TAKE IT ALL BACK! FUCK anyone who wanted you to remove this! Are you considering expanding upon it here atleast?
3greenarrow679I TAKE IT ALL BACK! FUCK anyone who wanted you to remove this! Are you considering expanding upon it here atleast?
8/21/2021 c14 Guest
I think you did right by removing Molly W. from there, for lots of reasons I am too lazy to write. Regards.
I think you did right by removing Molly W. from there, for lots of reasons I am too lazy to write. Regards.