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10/8/2020 c1 RainDancin
Okay I have to say I really am enjoying your story so far for first chapter it's you did very good World building. As well as setting the stage for Harry and his family. I love how you how you brought in with the dursleys and even Mooney by making them Humane and not as you said down on their luck and not doing anything.
10/8/2020 c1 Wentley
One note that I was hoping to be brought up, was Petunia telling Remus she can’t remember how to get into Diagon. I caught the fact that Dumble had obliviated/confounded her through the letter (or in person) but hoped Remus could tell her and get around it that way! Get Harry access to his money early.

The recipe and food porn is niiiiiiiiiiiice.
10/8/2020 c1 mcmouse-au
I am enjoying the story, but felt I had to point out one 'tiny' problem - your huge lobster is less than 10cm (4 inches) long. I think you meant to use centimetres instead of millimeters. If you are using mm, you need to remember to add a 0. So 96mm 9.6cm. 96cm 960mm
10/8/2020 c1 jilumasam
Good start! Good to see Remus early on in the story.
10/8/2020 c1 1Calmzone1
Sweet. Nice story
10/8/2020 c1 marebear8484
Very nice first chapter, I liked the early appearance of Remus.

I really like how all of your Harry’s have a special and artistic talent/. Fun to read!
10/8/2020 c1 2JannaKalderash
This is intriguing; Harry is definitely infusing his magic into the food. I’ll bet that he watches all of the cooking shows that TV has to offer.

Except for Gordon Ramsey; Petunia wouldn’t stand for Harry learning any bad language from that chump.
10/8/2020 c1 21keitaya
Very different to any other HP story I have found.
Enjoyable but you keep switching between CM and MM for catch size. A crab 100cm is a giant! While a lobster 90mm is the size of a prawn/shrimp.
10/8/2020 c1 2decadenceofmysoul
Awesome start!
10/8/2020 c1 23Rori Potter
Intriguing premise. Wow. Update soon.
10/8/2020 c1 LinnThompson
Oh Yay. I love your stories so much.
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