for The Untold, What Ifs? (Hiatus)4/26/2022 c33 Magnolia512
Your writing is brilliant! I enjoyed this story and congratulate on not abandoning it. However as other author’s on fanfic have learned- reviews turn into a contest between Team Edward or Team Jacob! Trying to force the writer into telling the story they want to hear. My advice for what it’s worth is thiswrite the story you want!
Your writing is brilliant! I enjoyed this story and congratulate on not abandoning it. However as other author’s on fanfic have learned- reviews turn into a contest between Team Edward or Team Jacob! Trying to force the writer into telling the story they want to hear. My advice for what it’s worth is thiswrite the story you want!
3/11/2022 c33 Jillgrab
I can’t wait for summer ‘22! Thank you for telling us it will be awhile before another chapter is posted! I’m really enjoying the story so far!
I can’t wait for summer ‘22! Thank you for telling us it will be awhile before another chapter is posted! I’m really enjoying the story so far!
3/11/2022 c32 Jillgrab
I knew he had to be there when she saw Victoria! I knew he had to be protecting her! Please tell me they are able to help Edward! This can’t be the end of him.
I knew he had to be there when she saw Victoria! I knew he had to be protecting her! Please tell me they are able to help Edward! This can’t be the end of him.
3/11/2022 c28 Jillgrab
Sorry you aren’t getting a ton of reviews. I’m binge reading this and I just don’t think about it as I’m going along. I really enjoy the story though. I know it’s been awhile since you’ve written a new chapter. I hope you come back one day to finish. I’m already bummed I know it won’t be completed by the time I finish.
Sorry you aren’t getting a ton of reviews. I’m binge reading this and I just don’t think about it as I’m going along. I really enjoy the story though. I know it’s been awhile since you’ve written a new chapter. I hope you come back one day to finish. I’m already bummed I know it won’t be completed by the time I finish.
3/11/2022 c16 Jillgrab
Oh this is heartbreaking! I hope he finds a way to reveal himself and she accepts it! I’m always team Edward!
Oh this is heartbreaking! I hope he finds a way to reveal himself and she accepts it! I’m always team Edward!
2/21/2022 c33 
8writingblondie
I hope eventually you have the time to come back to this! I really enjoy what you have done so far, and can’t wait to see who she ends up with in the end! You have such unique story lines. Great work!
8writingblondieI hope eventually you have the time to come back to this! I really enjoy what you have done so far, and can’t wait to see who she ends up with in the end! You have such unique story lines. Great work!
1/6/2022 c32 karma.willow.designs
I love the turn in the story and now things can begin progressing toward graduation and a future with all the Cullen hopefully.
I love the turn in the story and now things can begin progressing toward graduation and a future with all the Cullen hopefully.
8/15/2021 c33 HagridsButtcrack0
I really love this fic and the way Bella and Jacob's relationship is progressing. I hope they stay together even if Edward comes back into her life even though I am a Team Edward at heart.
I really love this fic and the way Bella and Jacob's relationship is progressing. I hope they stay together even if Edward comes back into her life even though I am a Team Edward at heart.