for A Fruitless Start11/1/2020 c3 epantoja521
I don't think Luffy can be an explorer for long if he harbors Nico Robin and Franky with them later on
I don't think Luffy can be an explorer for long if he harbors Nico Robin and Franky with them later on
10/28/2020 c4 sasukesdoom
cool chapter! curious to see how the marine's will deal with luffy going pirate! thanks for updating
cool chapter! curious to see how the marine's will deal with luffy going pirate! thanks for updating
10/27/2020 c4 
2Monxu Aki
hmmm so Tequila Wolf is next? Interesting, it's a place that I think Oda will use for something in the future and not only the few bits we sow at the 2y3d arc with Nico Robin, wonderful chapter its hilarious to imagine how Luffy will act about knowing what they did in Conomi Islands dahahaha and the frist match against Gin... well you said he was not going all out but he kinda should have, would have saved some lives, althought maybe the overuse of Haki will had him weeker, hope to read the next chapter soon!
2Monxu Akihmmm so Tequila Wolf is next? Interesting, it's a place that I think Oda will use for something in the future and not only the few bits we sow at the 2y3d arc with Nico Robin, wonderful chapter its hilarious to imagine how Luffy will act about knowing what they did in Conomi Islands dahahaha and the frist match against Gin... well you said he was not going all out but he kinda should have, would have saved some lives, althought maybe the overuse of Haki will had him weeker, hope to read the next chapter soon!
10/26/2020 c3 Monxu Aki
I love it, i find it interesting how Lu has trained to reach haki potential and the amount of somewhat-planning he does for future training in mid-fight against Arlong. Cant wait to read another chapter!
I love it, i find it interesting how Lu has trained to reach haki potential and the amount of somewhat-planning he does for future training in mid-fight against Arlong. Cant wait to read another chapter!
10/22/2020 c3 ChunkyFunkyMunky
I am a bit worried that the three new crewmates are Johnny, Yosaku, and Gin.
I am a bit worried that the three new crewmates are Johnny, Yosaku, and Gin.
10/18/2020 c2 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Damn, I was excited for this story, but now it seems that it is not for me. I wished more was disclosed in the first chapter.
Romance is, unfortunately, a huge turn off. The reason why shounen, especially One Piece, works is that romance is not a focus or nonexistent—harems are absolutely stupid.
Pity that you are going to add an OC to his crew; I have learned to hate them. The best OCs are minor and/or temporary.
Damn, I was excited for this story, but now it seems that it is not for me. I wished more was disclosed in the first chapter.
Romance is, unfortunately, a huge turn off. The reason why shounen, especially One Piece, works is that romance is not a focus or nonexistent—harems are absolutely stupid.
Pity that you are going to add an OC to his crew; I have learned to hate them. The best OCs are minor and/or temporary.