for A Fruitless Start10/15/2020 c1 Awareness Bringer
Looks alright, even if some spell checking might be in order, but will there be romance in this? In my experience, a fanfiction that’s too friendship-oriented can be pretty boring almost immediately. I’m not against the concept of friendship, but romance goes a long way, especially when it involves the main character. Also, will Luffy’s recruit more crew members than in canon and how fare in the canonical story are you?
Looks alright, even if some spell checking might be in order, but will there be romance in this? In my experience, a fanfiction that’s too friendship-oriented can be pretty boring almost immediately. I’m not against the concept of friendship, but romance goes a long way, especially when it involves the main character. Also, will Luffy’s recruit more crew members than in canon and how fare in the canonical story are you?