for A Fruitless Start1/12/2021 c10 
4Dailydour
Good story, noticed you have improved on the grammar. Dialogue can still be a bit rough. Enjoying the direction so far
4DailydourGood story, noticed you have improved on the grammar. Dialogue can still be a bit rough. Enjoying the direction so far
1/5/2021 c10 4SoralTheSol
The best part, is when Luffy finally sets out to call himself a Pirate, He will Still be a King and Still have amazing PR and Still will not loot or pillage so the world Government won't be able to do jack shit. I love it.
4SoralTheSolThe best part, is when Luffy finally sets out to call himself a Pirate, He will Still be a King and Still have amazing PR and Still will not loot or pillage so the world Government won't be able to do jack shit. I love it.
1/1/2021 c10 bloodshark
I love it great start. Oh Nami getting a bull fruit interesting. All I can picture Nami as a muscle women/Amazon I like it also it Makes Nami seem more like first mate/ second in command. I also wondering how sirton arcs will go like Drum island ending up forming alliance as would Alabasta with the fruit and flower Kingdom. Also I could see the world Government making/ offering Luffy a Shichibukai/ Seven warlord position, then revoking it after he decks a celestial dragon. Oh and I can see Luffy after the whole Alabasta Arc offering the baroque works access to a quit life in the Fruit and Flower Kingdom to help bust up power so Marines don't get any idea to mess with his people. oh I can't wait. also a little buzzled but what ever happen to Captain Axe hand Morgan is he still around or did he get purged? Just Wondering.
I love it great start. Oh Nami getting a bull fruit interesting. All I can picture Nami as a muscle women/Amazon I like it also it Makes Nami seem more like first mate/ second in command. I also wondering how sirton arcs will go like Drum island ending up forming alliance as would Alabasta with the fruit and flower Kingdom. Also I could see the world Government making/ offering Luffy a Shichibukai/ Seven warlord position, then revoking it after he decks a celestial dragon. Oh and I can see Luffy after the whole Alabasta Arc offering the baroque works access to a quit life in the Fruit and Flower Kingdom to help bust up power so Marines don't get any idea to mess with his people. oh I can't wait. also a little buzzled but what ever happen to Captain Axe hand Morgan is he still around or did he get purged? Just Wondering.
12/31/2020 c10 1Yamajiji
Nice chapter. It’s interesting seeing Nami with a Devil Fruit. Krieg is gonna get fucked in Paradise too, can’t wait for that. Wonder when you’ll introduce Ussop? Can’t wait. Great job here.
1YamajijiNice chapter. It’s interesting seeing Nami with a Devil Fruit. Krieg is gonna get fucked in Paradise too, can’t wait for that. Wonder when you’ll introduce Ussop? Can’t wait. Great job here.
12/27/2020 c9 ficus
Thanks for the fanfic) Interesting and unusual
Thanks for the fanfic) Interesting and unusual
12/23/2020 c9 vilgax
Wow that's one of the best one piece fic I have ever read
Can't wait for u to continue
Keep up the good work and update soon
Wow that's one of the best one piece fic I have ever read
Can't wait for u to continue
Keep up the good work and update soon
12/21/2020 c6 chunnin33
With that head canon on Krieg it's plausible the Govt SENT Mihawk to deal with him after getting wind of his plans to leave East Blue.
With that head canon on Krieg it's plausible the Govt SENT Mihawk to deal with him after getting wind of his plans to leave East Blue.
12/20/2020 c9 Prometo
A very good chapter. I liked the fights. Sanji is in command, leaving only Usopp and their ship.
I always thought that Nami's Fruit of Alvida would do. But since you have already invented the Fruit for her, I really hope that it has not been shown either in the manga, or in the anime, or in the films.
A very good chapter. I liked the fights. Sanji is in command, leaving only Usopp and their ship.
I always thought that Nami's Fruit of Alvida would do. But since you have already invented the Fruit for her, I really hope that it has not been shown either in the manga, or in the anime, or in the films.