for A Fruitless Start12/20/2020 c9 One piecerules100
Well until we see your choice of devil fruit we will not know if Oda might have it show up or not considering the type of zone he gave Kaido.
Well until we see your choice of devil fruit we will not know if Oda might have it show up or not considering the type of zone he gave Kaido.
12/19/2020 c9 
1Yamajiji
This was really cool. Sanji is gonna join up with them which is awesome. Can’t wait for that. They’re gonna get Krieg too. That'll be great. And I love that Nami is conscious of her weakness and is taking steps to combat that. The conversation between Sengoku and Garp was really interesting too. Great chapter.
1YamajijiThis was really cool. Sanji is gonna join up with them which is awesome. Can’t wait for that. They’re gonna get Krieg too. That'll be great. And I love that Nami is conscious of her weakness and is taking steps to combat that. The conversation between Sengoku and Garp was really interesting too. Great chapter.
12/19/2020 c9 asighoaighnqllg
I remember seeing a typo where I think you wrote putted or something else with an -ed at the end of the word. Anyways, I liked the chapter and am eager to read the next chapter soon.
For Nami, how about the Shimmer-shimmer fruit, or a zoan? Bird zoan? Because luck does not always favour you when it comes to devil fruits. It might be more realistic and a tad more challenging to write a Zoan Nami. How about the peacock fruit?
I remember seeing a typo where I think you wrote putted or something else with an -ed at the end of the word. Anyways, I liked the chapter and am eager to read the next chapter soon.
For Nami, how about the Shimmer-shimmer fruit, or a zoan? Bird zoan? Because luck does not always favour you when it comes to devil fruits. It might be more realistic and a tad more challenging to write a Zoan Nami. How about the peacock fruit?
12/7/2020 c8 5moonl337
AWESOMETACULAR
Great ideas that fit well into the one piece world
Shinzo for nakama
5moonl337AWESOMETACULAR
Great ideas that fit well into the one piece world
Shinzo for nakama
12/6/2020 c8 Prometo
I like everything. But one thing interests. Quartermaster, he seems to be leading the vanguard during the abartage?
I like everything. But one thing interests. Quartermaster, he seems to be leading the vanguard during the abartage?
12/3/2020 c8 1Yamajiji
Dude I fucking love this. The solution you thought up for the protection of the East Blue islands not under any kingdom was awesome. I love it. Can’t wait to see Krieg go down. Oh, and I’m really curious as to how exactly Ussop and Santi will join up with them. I imagine its gonna be real different. I agree with you on the fights in East Blue. In cannon they really are more character driven, and they’re stronger here, so they shouldn’t be the focus of this arc. You’ve done a great job with this. Can’t wait for more.
1YamajijiDude I fucking love this. The solution you thought up for the protection of the East Blue islands not under any kingdom was awesome. I love it. Can’t wait to see Krieg go down. Oh, and I’m really curious as to how exactly Ussop and Santi will join up with them. I imagine its gonna be real different. I agree with you on the fights in East Blue. In cannon they really are more character driven, and they’re stronger here, so they shouldn’t be the focus of this arc. You’ve done a great job with this. Can’t wait for more.
12/3/2020 c7 Yamajiji
I like your theory on Haki. I think you’re completely right. I’m really enjoying this up until now. Great job with this story.
I like your theory on Haki. I think you’re completely right. I’m really enjoying this up until now. Great job with this story.
12/3/2020 c6 Yamajiji
This was great. Can’t wait for Luffy to start sailing, especially since he knows more of haki now. RIP to Ana too, she was an awesome OC. Buggy and Krieg are next, and I can’t wait.
This was great. Can’t wait for Luffy to start sailing, especially since he knows more of haki now. RIP to Ana too, she was an awesome OC. Buggy and Krieg are next, and I can’t wait.
12/3/2020 c5 Yamajiji
I like how you’re going about powering up Luffy and Zoro before cannon. Anna’s story is pretty interesting, and since he’s going there, I wonder if he’s going to end up meeting some revolutionaries. Great chapter.
I like how you’re going about powering up Luffy and Zoro before cannon. Anna’s story is pretty interesting, and since he’s going there, I wonder if he’s going to end up meeting some revolutionaries. Great chapter.
12/3/2020 c4 Yamajiji
Wonder where theyre goin now? Again, I’m loving what you did basically making him a bounty hunter before he’s a pirate. He’s bound to get a huge bounty for East Blue standards once he starts pirating. Great chapter.
Wonder where theyre goin now? Again, I’m loving what you did basically making him a bounty hunter before he’s a pirate. He’s bound to get a huge bounty for East Blue standards once he starts pirating. Great chapter.
12/3/2020 c3 Yamajiji
This was awesome. Nami is going with him, I hope he meets some of the other crew members. Him gaining notoriety this early on is awesome too. Great job.
This was awesome. Nami is going with him, I hope he meets some of the other crew members. Him gaining notoriety this early on is awesome too. Great job.
12/3/2020 c2 Yamajiji
This is fucking awesome. I love it. Dadan and Luffy’s mother/son relationship is pretty nice to read, and I can’t wait to see him kicking Arlong’s ass. The thing with the sea kings is awesome too. Him fighting Spot and then the other one is awesome and hilarious. Great chapter.
This is fucking awesome. I love it. Dadan and Luffy’s mother/son relationship is pretty nice to read, and I can’t wait to see him kicking Arlong’s ass. The thing with the sea kings is awesome too. Him fighting Spot and then the other one is awesome and hilarious. Great chapter.