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11/23 c1 6Sunny Freedom
I really love this one-shot. Max and Markov are interesting characters, and you show them and their kind of thinking so extremely well!
it's a bit sad that we disn't see the reactions of the superheroes to the identity of Hawkmoth but I suppose Max getting irritated by their frequent interruptions and emotions would have cut off his flow.
11/5 c1 1geekqueen2010
Woo! Get em Max! Get em Markov!
10/30 c1 Guest
AMAZING. Now i’m going to keep wondering why this doesn’t happen on the show lol.
10/31 c1 HeyVen
I understood most of it and liked it a lot! its fun to read from Max's perspective :-)
10/24 c1 6Dusk the Cybertronian Wolf
I'm so happy you made a part two of this!
10/21 c1 2Silvanon of the Orchard
Great story! I enjoyed it!
10/18 c1 FellowFanfict
Awesome story! I love all your works! I'm pretty sure you're considered to be one of the top Miraculous fan works writer/celeb out there!
~FellowFanfictioneer
10/16 c1 Guest
The analysis stuff was actually pretty fun to read, despite not knowing much about it. The power of logic strikes again!
10/16 c1 LunaWolf44
Yes! Max tracked down Hawkmoth and he doesn’t want any recognition!
I like Kim here and how Max had to break the law to get the results! It was very cool!
10/16 c1 3Mysticarts
Very well done. Love the idea of Max taking that idea and running with it and Hawkmoth not knowing what hit him.
10/15 c1 Megan Cheang
I’m impressed with your technical jargon
10/15 c1 56Star Fata
I love Max using his intelligence for heroic analysis! It was really cool how he evaluated his friends likelihood of spilling the beans, and how Kim helped both with the stakeout and with watching the videos.
10/15 c1 2V01dSw0rd
Rather than a Magical Coma, I feel like something far more permanent happened to Emilie...

On the other hand, it would be EXTRA ironic if the whole reason for everything was something like ‘her soul got pulled forward in time’. In other words, the cause for Hawkmoth’s Villany was a Predestination Paradox. (That would likely devastate Gabriel...)
10/15 c1 22leafgreenflower
Ooh, lovely! The stats was fine - though I'm not an unbiased reader, I love stats and did computer modelling for a while, so it was delightful to read -grin-. Seeing Max do his thing, encouraged by Kim? Awesome stuff and hilarious.
10/15 c1 494yellow 14
It worked. Very good, keep writing
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