for Defeat by Data11/23/2020 c1 
8Sunny Freedom
I really love this one-shot. Max and Markov are interesting characters, and you show them and their kind of thinking so extremely well!
it's a bit sad that we disn't see the reactions of the superheroes to the identity of Hawkmoth but I suppose Max getting irritated by their frequent interruptions and emotions would have cut off his flow.
8Sunny FreedomI really love this one-shot. Max and Markov are interesting characters, and you show them and their kind of thinking so extremely well!
it's a bit sad that we disn't see the reactions of the superheroes to the identity of Hawkmoth but I suppose Max getting irritated by their frequent interruptions and emotions would have cut off his flow.
10/30/2020 c1 Guest
AMAZING. Now i’m going to keep wondering why this doesn’t happen on the show lol.
AMAZING. Now i’m going to keep wondering why this doesn’t happen on the show lol.
10/31/2020 c1 HeyVen
I understood most of it and liked it a lot! its fun to read from Max's perspective :-)
I understood most of it and liked it a lot! its fun to read from Max's perspective :-)
10/18/2020 c1 FellowFanfict
Awesome story! I love all your works! I'm pretty sure you're considered to be one of the top Miraculous fan works writer/celeb out there!
~FellowFanfictioneer
Awesome story! I love all your works! I'm pretty sure you're considered to be one of the top Miraculous fan works writer/celeb out there!
~FellowFanfictioneer
10/16/2020 c1 Guest
The analysis stuff was actually pretty fun to read, despite not knowing much about it. The power of logic strikes again!
The analysis stuff was actually pretty fun to read, despite not knowing much about it. The power of logic strikes again!
10/16/2020 c1 LunaWolf44
Yes! Max tracked down Hawkmoth and he doesn’t want any recognition!
I like Kim here and how Max had to break the law to get the results! It was very cool!
Yes! Max tracked down Hawkmoth and he doesn’t want any recognition!
I like Kim here and how Max had to break the law to get the results! It was very cool!
10/16/2020 c1 3Mysticarts
Very well done. Love the idea of Max taking that idea and running with it and Hawkmoth not knowing what hit him.
3MysticartsVery well done. Love the idea of Max taking that idea and running with it and Hawkmoth not knowing what hit him.
10/15/2020 c1 56Star Fata
I love Max using his intelligence for heroic analysis! It was really cool how he evaluated his friends likelihood of spilling the beans, and how Kim helped both with the stakeout and with watching the videos.
56Star FataI love Max using his intelligence for heroic analysis! It was really cool how he evaluated his friends likelihood of spilling the beans, and how Kim helped both with the stakeout and with watching the videos.
10/15/2020 c1 2V01dSw0rd
Rather than a Magical Coma, I feel like something far more permanent happened to Emilie...
On the other hand, it would be EXTRA ironic if the whole reason for everything was something like ‘her soul got pulled forward in time’. In other words, the cause for Hawkmoth’s Villany was a Predestination Paradox. (That would likely devastate Gabriel...)
2V01dSw0rdRather than a Magical Coma, I feel like something far more permanent happened to Emilie...
On the other hand, it would be EXTRA ironic if the whole reason for everything was something like ‘her soul got pulled forward in time’. In other words, the cause for Hawkmoth’s Villany was a Predestination Paradox. (That would likely devastate Gabriel...)
10/15/2020 c1 22leafgreenflower
Ooh, lovely! The stats was fine - though I'm not an unbiased reader, I love stats and did computer modelling for a while, so it was delightful to read -grin-. Seeing Max do his thing, encouraged by Kim? Awesome stuff and hilarious.
22leafgreenflowerOoh, lovely! The stats was fine - though I'm not an unbiased reader, I love stats and did computer modelling for a while, so it was delightful to read -grin-. Seeing Max do his thing, encouraged by Kim? Awesome stuff and hilarious.