for Love At First Word10/16/2020 c1 raeliic
This - this is really beautiful.
Thank you, author, we, readers, in the dire need of such things.
This - this is really beautiful.
Thank you, author, we, readers, in the dire need of such things.
10/15/2020 c1 MarquisR
I must confess that a tinge of envy blossomed in my heart as I read this. The prose flows so well—the dialogue natural, the little notes evocative. This only serves to remind me that I could never write like this. And yet...
Brilliant work, wordsmith.
I must confess that a tinge of envy blossomed in my heart as I read this. The prose flows so well—the dialogue natural, the little notes evocative. This only serves to remind me that I could never write like this. And yet...
Brilliant work, wordsmith.
10/15/2020 c1 
2Johnny Not Goode
Great stuff as always. Don't worry - the sex didn't read like lemon. On a side note, it's quite nice to see a fic that portrays our boy hachiman as literature-savvy. A lot of other fics often made him quite illiterate in literary matters, it's quite baffling - throughout the novels he had referenced Kenji Miyazawa, Dazai (I think), and even an enlightenment philosopher like Descartes, which he wouldn't acknowledge if he hadn't read them.
2Johnny Not GoodeGreat stuff as always. Don't worry - the sex didn't read like lemon. On a side note, it's quite nice to see a fic that portrays our boy hachiman as literature-savvy. A lot of other fics often made him quite illiterate in literary matters, it's quite baffling - throughout the novels he had referenced Kenji Miyazawa, Dazai (I think), and even an enlightenment philosopher like Descartes, which he wouldn't acknowledge if he hadn't read them.