
7/19/2021 c1 a girl
This is amazing and I loved it
But you should capitalize the word 'I'
This is amazing and I loved it
But you should capitalize the word 'I'
10/21/2020 c1 Kitten Arina
This has been interesting but it is a little on the slow side. There are also some issues with grammar as a lot of the I’s are lowercase when they shouldn’t be. If you could fix this before the next chapter I think that you would get more people to enjoy this story.
This has been interesting but it is a little on the slow side. There are also some issues with grammar as a lot of the I’s are lowercase when they shouldn’t be. If you could fix this before the next chapter I think that you would get more people to enjoy this story.