
3/16/2021 c7
21BlackDragonDevilGod
Okay, I’ll say it:
Wonderful. Simply wonderful, here’s to hoping to see more soon!

Okay, I’ll say it:
Wonderful. Simply wonderful, here’s to hoping to see more soon!
3/14/2021 c6
11Solmanthe1st
This is AWESOME. I just got to say it. I hope this gets updated soon, because honestly this is the most original story I've seen yet. This reminds me of the initial hype I had for S4, only to learn it's just Eren nearly destroying the world with the rumbling. Kind of a let down!

This is AWESOME. I just got to say it. I hope this gets updated soon, because honestly this is the most original story I've seen yet. This reminds me of the initial hype I had for S4, only to learn it's just Eren nearly destroying the world with the rumbling. Kind of a let down!
2/22/2021 c6 Crescent cut 101
Hope to see more soon, hope you prioritize this one more since it's rare where the paradise island have advance tech.
Hope to see more soon, hope you prioritize this one more since it's rare where the paradise island have advance tech.
2/20/2021 c6 Guest
Waiting for next chapter
Waiting for next chapter
2/21/2021 c6
2lleamsi
Pretty interesting story so far! can't wait for more. some of the german terminologies left me blank while reading but I generally get what it meant. the only thing I would comment is your typos. Try proof reading more or get someone to do it for you

Pretty interesting story so far! can't wait for more. some of the german terminologies left me blank while reading but I generally get what it meant. the only thing I would comment is your typos. Try proof reading more or get someone to do it for you
2/21/2021 c6
1JintoLin
With this new world it is a scary thought that Kenny Levi and Mikasa among the rest of the Ackerman clan could all be working together with Eren and Christa...which leads into the 'Yet' as it seems there is nothing be pain in store of the rest of the world outside of Paradis

With this new world it is a scary thought that Kenny Levi and Mikasa among the rest of the Ackerman clan could all be working together with Eren and Christa...which leads into the 'Yet' as it seems there is nothing be pain in store of the rest of the world outside of Paradis
2/21/2021 c6 Devor
Huh so it was the Manchuri that extinguished the Shogun bloodline. I really like how you do world building. Thanks for the chapter!
Huh so it was the Manchuri that extinguished the Shogun bloodline. I really like how you do world building. Thanks for the chapter!
2/20/2021 c6 Hellibleri
I like this story. It’s a “what if” scenario of what would happen if Grisha did succeed, and I like that. Very well done, I’m waiting for the next chapter. Take your time
I like this story. It’s a “what if” scenario of what would happen if Grisha did succeed, and I like that. Very well done, I’m waiting for the next chapter. Take your time
2/20/2021 c6
148AkumaKami64
Okay, Order, I don't know if this is intentionally AU of you or not, but I wanted t o tell you before the reviewers start digging in:
That is NOT the symbol of the Ackerman family. That is the symbol of the Azumabito, the clan of the Shogun. Ackermans are an entirely Eldian thing as Royal Bodyguards.

Okay, Order, I don't know if this is intentionally AU of you or not, but I wanted t o tell you before the reviewers start digging in:
That is NOT the symbol of the Ackerman family. That is the symbol of the Azumabito, the clan of the Shogun. Ackermans are an entirely Eldian thing as Royal Bodyguards.
2/20/2021 c6 FirstbornTheFallen
Oh man I actually got goosebumps at that chapter, and I had hoped to see Eren or Mikasa there too. Alas it was an epic teaser
Oh man I actually got goosebumps at that chapter, and I had hoped to see Eren or Mikasa there too. Alas it was an epic teaser
2/20/2021 c5
318Traitor of All Traitors
Go over it thoroughly and you may find what you need to know.

Go over it thoroughly and you may find what you need to know.