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11/16/2020 c2 1JintoLin
I take it Paradis is not technologically challenged as they were in canon and have built things up in secret something like America's 'Manhattan Project'. i love this world building while a bit slow in places but it is needed to establish places and people that will taking place throughout the story going forward.

Kinda hope this is a massive AU that throws a lot of what he know of canon out the window
11/13/2020 c2 alkirius
As I get an idea of how the founding titan works, I will tell you that the day could have technology from the second world war
11/13/2020 c2 4JaphetSkie
11/12/2020 c2 150AkumaKami64
You and me need to have a talk one day about your world building, as I'm curious to how you came up with these names for different regions/countries of the world. That is one of my harder issue with AoT since, in terms of places and cultures, its really just an alternate version of our world.

Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter. Felt it dragged out a bit in a few places, just waiting to see when the Eldian Shoe would drop.

Frankly, I think I might do a story like this one day: An AU where the Vow Against War either wasn't in place or just got broken, and the Eldians take back their empire.

Hmm, while Rumbling the world is off the table, I can see them Rumbling a fort or something. You know, basically use them as an automic bomb.

My biggest question is how Eren exists. Was Grisha just born in Paradis or did something canon-ish happen?

Reason I ask this is because it leads into another issue: Have the Marleyans still been doing their dump jobs on Paradis, turning people into Titans? cause...that means Paradis has a BIG army of Pure Titans. And...oh boy, if they've been experimenting with those and the Founding Titan.

Hm, also wondering how Ymir Fritz herself will play into this.

Loving the story! And glad you enjoyed Ripple of Kindness!
11/5/2020 c1 AkumaKami64
Okay, serious talk, did you delete chapter 2 or is the site acting up?
10/27/2020 c1 Guest
This story is great and all but how the warriors mission went ?
10/18/2020 c1 Guest
I like it
10/20/2020 c1 1Comrade Broseph
'Queen Historia, King Jaeger' - why does he address Historia by name but Eren by his surname? And anyway, what happened to Historia's siblings that she ended up Queen?

And while this is all very interesting it's also so improbable as to be impossible. For instance - the moment the new king was crowned he could have restored Eldian control over the continent within weeks. There was no pact with the founding titan after all. There is no reason to arbitrarily wait 100 years for the main cast to be the ones to do it.
10/19/2020 c1 sasukesdoom
Interesting idea!
10/18/2020 c1 Guest
Good history waiting for more
10/18/2020 c1 BaddMannlegit
sounds interesting, I'll give it a read
10/18/2020 c1 323Traitor of All Traitors
Okay, you have me intrigued. Just how much of the story will be a deviation from what actually happened in canon? And I want to see what becomes of the other characters, too.

I want to see Hange, Sasha, Armin and Ymir.
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