for The Madness of Ravens4/21/2021 c5 
7Livxoxo
I love this, every single paragraph.
it's so fantastically written!
And omg I totally agree with Lyra, she reflects my personal frustrations with the real world lol
7LivxoxoI love this, every single paragraph.
it's so fantastically written!
And omg I totally agree with Lyra, she reflects my personal frustrations with the real world lol
4/1/2021 c12 IncessantNovember
I liked this chapter being from Lucius's point of view. Seeing the divergence that Lyra's existence caused. Also actually making him a character with depth, alongside Draco, rather than the cardboard cutout painted in shades of Bad Guy that you'd usually read.
I liked this chapter being from Lucius's point of view. Seeing the divergence that Lyra's existence caused. Also actually making him a character with depth, alongside Draco, rather than the cardboard cutout painted in shades of Bad Guy that you'd usually read.
3/3/2021 c11 Capeus
This chapter was very [REDACTED] and made me think of [REDACTED]. The snake elder stuff is also clearly referring to old scandinavian myths of [REDACTED].
It’s a cool way forward to have [REDACTED] and [REDACTED] deal with these eldritch beings or their influence. Also with future alternate realities having an overarching eldritch threat hovering in the far beyond of [REDACTED].
This chapter was very [REDACTED] and made me think of [REDACTED]. The snake elder stuff is also clearly referring to old scandinavian myths of [REDACTED].
It’s a cool way forward to have [REDACTED] and [REDACTED] deal with these eldritch beings or their influence. Also with future alternate realities having an overarching eldritch threat hovering in the far beyond of [REDACTED].
2/25/2021 c10 4najex
A Discordant Note reference ;)
Though perverting Luna into a sex crazed caricature happened in the prequal
4najexA Discordant Note reference ;)
Though perverting Luna into a sex crazed caricature happened in the prequal
1/25/2021 c6 BruhImTheGlitch
Aright,i don't have anything against using and manipulating people like chess pieces,but lyra is not even goal is really good but just the way she does things are so also claim this is a dual si fic but in reality it really is just a main si with a sidecharacter someone please tell me why the hell is James such a pushover,he knows she does things behind his back but doesn't do shit about it,just let's her keep on doing what she wants but restricts his own actions because "she told him to"
Have a good evening.
Aright,i don't have anything against using and manipulating people like chess pieces,but lyra is not even goal is really good but just the way she does things are so also claim this is a dual si fic but in reality it really is just a main si with a sidecharacter someone please tell me why the hell is James such a pushover,he knows she does things behind his back but doesn't do shit about it,just let's her keep on doing what she wants but restricts his own actions because "she told him to"
Have a good evening.
1/21/2021 c9 Rex Aeternum
'as if he forgets notice-me-not charms existed.'
They don't though. Just like the 'Tempus' spell, and the 'Point Me' spell acting like anything other than a northward pointing compass, notice-me-not charms are entirely fanon.
'as if he forgets notice-me-not charms existed.'
They don't though. Just like the 'Tempus' spell, and the 'Point Me' spell acting like anything other than a northward pointing compass, notice-me-not charms are entirely fanon.
1/18/2021 c4 Jack1nTheBox
Might come back later but for now I'm calling it quits. I really don't like Lyra, I don't mind manipulation, or risky plans but if you have a partner in crime they should at the very least be told. And asking him to write in the diary is really not something I can get behind. Also not a fan of the fact that James just seems to go along with it, I would sure as hell not write in the diary at her suggestion, or anyone's suggestion as a matter of fact.
Anyway, as far as dual SI's go this one isn't bad but I am just not a fan of the dynamic they have.
Might come back later but for now I'm calling it quits. I really don't like Lyra, I don't mind manipulation, or risky plans but if you have a partner in crime they should at the very least be told. And asking him to write in the diary is really not something I can get behind. Also not a fan of the fact that James just seems to go along with it, I would sure as hell not write in the diary at her suggestion, or anyone's suggestion as a matter of fact.
Anyway, as far as dual SI's go this one isn't bad but I am just not a fan of the dynamic they have.