for The Dread Lord of Essos3/5 c58 
21Ptool
okay, glad to have some plot progression. it's been pretty slow going for the last ten chapters or so.
21Ptoolokay, glad to have some plot progression. it's been pretty slow going for the last ten chapters or so.
2/22 c1 2AvidReader2425
Certainly not a bad opening chapter, although the paragraphs near the end could probably use some spacing. anyway, thanks for the chapter.
2AvidReader2425Certainly not a bad opening chapter, although the paragraphs near the end could probably use some spacing. anyway, thanks for the chapter.
2/17 c57 ThatHarryJamesPotter
I have mixed feelings about this story, the Patreon why would you do that with other people's work, the pace these new chapters have, the whole updating schedule and the fact that at this point you make us wait for a long time only to give us porn we didn't ask for, like if you want to write porn without plot AO3 is filled with such, you are constantly leaving certain characters like Missandei and the black pearl maybe that being said I think the initial idea was brilliant and hope to have the story I started reading back.
I have mixed feelings about this story, the Patreon why would you do that with other people's work, the pace these new chapters have, the whole updating schedule and the fact that at this point you make us wait for a long time only to give us porn we didn't ask for, like if you want to write porn without plot AO3 is filled with such, you are constantly leaving certain characters like Missandei and the black pearl maybe that being said I think the initial idea was brilliant and hope to have the story I started reading back.
2/16 c57 Astravega
Im gonna be honest. This story has devolved into textbased porn. These days around 50% of each chapter is about fucking if not more and the story is taking a backseat that I honestly have no clue where its going or have recently been. So this is me getting off this train since I cant find the motivation to read this which is a shame since in the begining it was pretty good.
Im gonna be honest. This story has devolved into textbased porn. These days around 50% of each chapter is about fucking if not more and the story is taking a backseat that I honestly have no clue where its going or have recently been. So this is me getting off this train since I cant find the motivation to read this which is a shame since in the begining it was pretty good.
2/4 c57 Guest
im really getting tired of coming to new chapter and all it is is a fucking sex session that i tend skip over god damm waste of my time
im really getting tired of coming to new chapter and all it is is a fucking sex session that i tend skip over god damm waste of my time
2/4 c57 2Kayleigh J
And now I'm dropping this fic for good. I enjoyed it in the beginning, so I kept reading despite the RAPID deterioration of quality and every chapter having multiple sex scenes - which, I guarantee you, is the MOST BORING part of this whole fic - but now there isn't anything else I can justify this fic with, all you write is REALLY poor smut. And now 'Harry's' just a straight up pedo. Goodbye.
2Kayleigh JAnd now I'm dropping this fic for good. I enjoyed it in the beginning, so I kept reading despite the RAPID deterioration of quality and every chapter having multiple sex scenes - which, I guarantee you, is the MOST BORING part of this whole fic - but now there isn't anything else I can justify this fic with, all you write is REALLY poor smut. And now 'Harry's' just a straight up pedo. Goodbye.
2/2 c56 Church21
Interesting read for a crack fic. Might sound dumb but it like to read version of this story thats not all smut
Interesting read for a crack fic. Might sound dumb but it like to read version of this story thats not all smut
2/1 c56 11Gabriel Herrol
And his collection of Stark women is complete! He sure know what to do and to say to obtain what he wants! XD Keep it up!
11Gabriel HerrolAnd his collection of Stark women is complete! He sure know what to do and to say to obtain what he wants! XD Keep it up!
2/1 c56 Blackholelord
Do, include the three Stark ladies in the same room action. You stated that the women of the Stark family automatically follows his lead, so it wouldn't be hard for a reunion of the three ladies ended with the three thanking the person who reunited the remaining members of their family together.
Do, include the three Stark ladies in the same room action. You stated that the women of the Stark family automatically follows his lead, so it wouldn't be hard for a reunion of the three ladies ended with the three thanking the person who reunited the remaining members of their family together.