for Return of the 414/11 c41 Guest
First of all, I want to admit that I really liked your story, you really did a great job. If you ask how the story could be better, the only answer I can give is that I think you made theocracy a little too stupid, usually the leaders of countries are not this stupid and arrogant. If you pay attention to this, it will be more realistic. Thank you again for writing this story, I hope you get back to writing after you pull yourself together.
First of all, I want to admit that I really liked your story, you really did a great job. If you ask how the story could be better, the only answer I can give is that I think you made theocracy a little too stupid, usually the leaders of countries are not this stupid and arrogant. If you pay attention to this, it will be more realistic. Thank you again for writing this story, I hope you get back to writing after you pull yourself together.
2/10 c44 UltimateAnimeEmp
I know this probably won't change your mind if you see it. But I couldn't leave without at least asking you to try and keep this story going. You do such a good job characterizing these little known members of the guild and I love it so much, not to mention how the world is moving around them. This story leaves a mark with me and I hope I'll see new chapters some time.
I know this probably won't change your mind if you see it. But I couldn't leave without at least asking you to try and keep this story going. You do such a good job characterizing these little known members of the guild and I love it so much, not to mention how the world is moving around them. This story leaves a mark with me and I hope I'll see new chapters some time.
12/7/2024 c44 Guest
It’s been a year now but it’s fine I’ve waited longer and I will wait until I die
It’s been a year now but it’s fine I’ve waited longer and I will wait until I die
10/3/2024 c44 Guest
Please update soon it's a great Story
Please update soon it's a great Story
9/21/2024 c44 33473358
Every now and again I come back here, checking if a new chapter has been posted. Unfortunately it seems have to wait a little longer for that. Life can get in the way, I get that, but remember this: once you post the next chapter, I'll be there. Reading it and feeling content, knowing the wait was worth it.
Every now and again I come back here, checking if a new chapter has been posted. Unfortunately it seems have to wait a little longer for that. Life can get in the way, I get that, but remember this: once you post the next chapter, I'll be there. Reading it and feeling content, knowing the wait was worth it.
8/13/2024 c44 Teressia
For anyone wondering about an update… uhhh, he said he WILL finish the story at some point. So… it‘s technically still ongoing.
For anyone wondering about an update… uhhh, he said he WILL finish the story at some point. So… it‘s technically still ongoing.
6/30/2024 c44 321Potatoe
Heya author… could you please maybe update? The story is great, very entertaining, maybe use a software for grammar and spell checks? But I have no real complains otherwise. Update?
Heya author… could you please maybe update? The story is great, very entertaining, maybe use a software for grammar and spell checks? But I have no real complains otherwise. Update?
4/5/2024 c44 Guest
FANTASTIC story, but I think author gave up on this story cause thuIs story hasn't updated for over a year.
FANTASTIC story, but I think author gave up on this story cause thuIs story hasn't updated for over a year.
2/12/2024 c44 defeated fan
zero updates and there's nothing we can do.
R.I.P one of my favorites behind the golden princess.
zero updates and there's nothing we can do.
R.I.P one of my favorites behind the golden princess.
12/21/2023 c15 Guest
Nevermind I'm dumb. I didn't read the whole story. Rip bozo I now feel stupid as hell.
Nevermind I'm dumb. I didn't read the whole story. Rip bozo I now feel stupid as hell.
12/21/2023 c15 Guest
Wait I'm confused. Wasn't Yuri and the rest technically jaldabaoth's minions in Neia's eyes? So why did they say they were created by ainz?
Wait I'm confused. Wasn't Yuri and the rest technically jaldabaoth's minions in Neia's eyes? So why did they say they were created by ainz?
12/1/2023 c10 Guest
I very much love this
I very much love this
9/26/2023 c44 Mafioso MONKE
Take your use updating this would prefer a good story over a rushed one and unlike most I have the capability to read other story’s In the meantime then reread this one once it gets updated so I’m fully refreshed on what’s happening so ya take your time but maybe not 1 chapter a year lol
Take your use updating this would prefer a good story over a rushed one and unlike most I have the capability to read other story’s In the meantime then reread this one once it gets updated so I’m fully refreshed on what’s happening so ya take your time but maybe not 1 chapter a year lol