for Lost Artworks of the Moonlit Hour5/12/2021 c52 
57ShadowPillow
For other people interested, the sequel story is now starting to be posted! It's under "Lost Artworks" under the author's profile.
57ShadowPillowFor other people interested, the sequel story is now starting to be posted! It's under "Lost Artworks" under the author's profile.
4/28/2021 c53 ShadowPillow
Hmm. I guess I look forward to seeing what you're going to do with it. I did think the persona elements made it more interesting, but I do definitely like the interactions with the DN Angel cast better – maybe just because Persona is so big. Anyways, I look forward to seeing that sequel and keep up the good work.
Hmm. I guess I look forward to seeing what you're going to do with it. I did think the persona elements made it more interesting, but I do definitely like the interactions with the DN Angel cast better – maybe just because Persona is so big. Anyways, I look forward to seeing that sequel and keep up the good work.
3/5/2021 c47 ShadowPillow
Ooh the stakes are raising.
"The bell that tolls at the final hour", huh? Death is the clock tower, Bel is the harbinger of it. So why i is he hanging out in Nagi's head? Was he assigned there to keep an eye on the reincarnated child? He obviously doesn't belong to the sect that Shadow!Death does, but it looks like there are maybe some deathly organizations going on...
Ooh the stakes are raising.
"The bell that tolls at the final hour", huh? Death is the clock tower, Bel is the harbinger of it. So why i is he hanging out in Nagi's head? Was he assigned there to keep an eye on the reincarnated child? He obviously doesn't belong to the sect that Shadow!Death does, but it looks like there are maybe some deathly organizations going on...
3/4/2021 c46 ShadowPillow
"Sandwiched between two pretty boys," Nagi said in a dead voice. "And they're both me."
Nagi, you're great.
I wonder if you're going to do large timeskips after this? To sort of brush over a lot of the territory covered here? I do wonder what's going on. I'm not as familiar with this Persona game so I'm also a little confused as to what they're trying to accomplish here. It seems like they're trying to figure out a way out of the situation, but Nagi can't really participate since he's weak, so they all just kind of opted for hanging out and having a good time instead.
(Also. So many names. I honestly don't know who is who at all on the Persona side of things.)
Anyway, that said, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going, so keep up the good work.
"Sandwiched between two pretty boys," Nagi said in a dead voice. "And they're both me."
Nagi, you're great.
I wonder if you're going to do large timeskips after this? To sort of brush over a lot of the territory covered here? I do wonder what's going on. I'm not as familiar with this Persona game so I'm also a little confused as to what they're trying to accomplish here. It seems like they're trying to figure out a way out of the situation, but Nagi can't really participate since he's weak, so they all just kind of opted for hanging out and having a good time instead.
(Also. So many names. I honestly don't know who is who at all on the Persona side of things.)
Anyway, that said, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going, so keep up the good work.
2/25/2021 c43 Matt
Could you please update Heroic Soul soon?
Could you please update Heroic Soul soon?
2/25/2021 c44 TITAN URANUS
You are either going to write stuff completely different from what his older paradox self is describing or you are just trying to kill all interest in this story by removing all tension with bad spoilers disguised as foreshadowing.
We already know that his future self will always be second string to anybody important and little more than a spectator from what you have shown so far. Whats the point of having a main character that never grows past being the "water boy"?
You are either going to write stuff completely different from what his older paradox self is describing or you are just trying to kill all interest in this story by removing all tension with bad spoilers disguised as foreshadowing.
We already know that his future self will always be second string to anybody important and little more than a spectator from what you have shown so far. Whats the point of having a main character that never grows past being the "water boy"?
2/25/2021 c44 IsekaiFanBoi
It's kinda gonna be dark if you realise that Negi is gonna meet Kotone again which means she's already been sealed. I think.
It's kinda gonna be dark if you realise that Negi is gonna meet Kotone again which means she's already been sealed. I think.